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Corrected by: Anita-Krempl , 2024-01-16 23:54:20
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Now that the beginning of winter has passed, the rare treasure conference of Mermaid Kingdom is about to be held. Lu Heng didn't want to delay any longer.
Corrected text:
Now that the beginning of winter has passed, the rare treasure conference of the Mermaid Kingdom is about to be held. Lu Heng didn't want to delay any longer.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-31 09:13:55
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As for the bustling and bustling of Nanhai City, he could enjoy it when they returned.
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As for the hustling and bustling of Nanhai City, he could enjoy it when they returned.
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Corrected by: Anita-Krempl , 2024-01-16 21:19:34
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Huo Feng said, "As for the reason why small businessmen didn't want to go to sea, was related to the rumored [Erba God Man] in the South Sea."
Corrected text:
Huo Feng said, "As for the reason why small businessmen don't want to go to sea, it is related to the rumored [Erba God Man] in the South Sea."
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Corrected by: umit-sivri , 2023-05-14 02:05:45
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"Oh? [Erba God Man]?" Lu Heng was a little interested, "[Erba God Man]… what is it? Why can it frighten these businessmen?"
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"Oh? [Erba God Man]?" Lu Heng was a little interested, "[Erba God Man]… what is it? Why can it scare these businessmen?"
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Corrected by: Luchyz-Hozzay , 2022-11-13 04:56:51
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Now, Huo Feng was relieved to see that Lu Heng didn't know the legendary [Erba God Man]. Since the Wolf God didn't know it, it must not be a powerful existence in ancient times.
Corrected text:
Now, Huo Feng was relieved to see that Lu Heng didn't know the legendary [Erba God Man]. Since the Wolf God didn't know it, it must not have been a powerful existence in ancient times.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:22:23
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"I don't know when it started. It's said that there is a supernatural being in the South Sea, named Erba God Man. His cultivation base is very high and his supernatural power is so powerful that no one dares to provoke him in the South Sea."
Corrected text:
"I don't know when it started. It's said that there is a supernatural being in the South Sea, named Erba God Man. Its cultivation base is very high and its supernatural power is so strong that no one dares to provoke it in the South Sea."
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:13:58
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"It is also said that the Erba God Man is actually sixteen brothers and sisters, each of whom masters a strong ability."
Corrected text:
"It is also said that the Erba God Man actually consists of sixteen brothers and sisters, each of whom have mastered a strong ability."
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:14:41
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Huo Feng said several different rumors one at a time, but all of them have one thing in common.
Corrected text:
Huo Feng said different rumors one at a time, but all of them had one thing in common.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:23:35
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——That is, that the Erba God Man was super strong, and wherever he went, there would be ghosts and evil entities creating chaos.
Corrected text:
——That is, that the Erba God Man was super strong, and wherever it went, it would be followed by ghosts and evil entities creating chaos.
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:15:35
Original text:
——That is, the Erba God Man is super strong, and wherever he goes, there will be ghosts and evil things causing chaos.
Corrected text:
——That is, that the Erba God Man was super strong, and wherever he went, there would be ghosts and evil entities creating chaos.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:24:31
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He didn't know whether it was the appearance of the Erba God Man that would cause chaos or the appearance of evil things that would attract the Erba God Man。
Corrected text:
He didn't know whether it was the appearance of the Erba God Man that lead to chaos or the appearance of evil things that would attract the Erba God Man。
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:16:33
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He doesn't know whether it is the appearance of the Erba God Man that will cause chaos or the appearance of evil things that will attract the Erba God Man。
Corrected text:
He didn't know whether it was the appearance of the Erba God Man that would cause chaos or the appearance of evil things that would attract the Erba God Man。
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:24:47
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Many fishermen in Nanhai City didn't want to go too far out to sea because of the legend of the Erba God Man, and water demons were also rampant at sea at this time.
Corrected text:
Many fishermen in Nanhai City didn't want to go too far out to sea because of the legend of the Erba God Man, and water demons were also rampant at sea during this time.
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:19:08
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Many fishermen in Nanhai City don't want to go too far out to sea, because of the legend of the Erba God Man, and water demons are indeed rampant overseas at this time.
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Many fishermen in Nanhai City didn't want to go too far out to sea because of the legend of the Erba God Man, and water demons were also rampant at sea at this time.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:20:08
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But for those ordinary people, any evil thing can bring ultimate disaster to them, so they don't want to go to sea.
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But for those ordinary people, any evil thing could bring ultimate disaster to them, so they didn't want to go out to sea.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:26:52
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"So in the South Sea today, there are evil demons and water demons rampant?" Lu Heng asked.
Corrected text:
"So in the South Sea currently, there are evil demons and water demons wreaking havoc?" Lu Heng asked.
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:20:32
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"So on the South Sea today, there are evil demons and water demons rampant?" Lu Heng asked.
Corrected text:
"So in the South Sea today, there are evil demons and water demons rampant?" Lu Heng asked.
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Corrected by: Anita-Krempl , 2024-01-16 21:19:34
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Huo Feng nodded, and then smiled, "But those water demons are not too strong, so don't worry too much. As long as we don't bump into the legendary Erba God Man, this trip will not dangerous."
Corrected text:
Huo Feng nodded, and then smiled, "But those water demons are not too strong, so don't worry too much. As long as we don't bump into the legendary Erba God Man, this trip will not be dangerous."
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:20:58
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Huo Feng nodded, and then smiled, "But those water demons are not too strong, so don't worry too much. As long as we don't bump into the legendary Erba God Man, this trip is not dangerous."
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Huo Feng nodded, and then smiled, "But those water demons are not too strong, so don't worry too much. As long as we don't bump into the legendary Erba God Man, this trip will not dangerous."
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:27:30
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"Of course, even if we encounter the legendary Erba God Man, they would have run away after seeing the Wolf God."
Corrected text:
"Of course, even if we do encounter the legendary Erba God Man, they would have to run away after seeing the Wolf God."
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:21:18
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"Of course, even if we encounter the legendary Erba God Man, he would have run away after seeing the Wolf God."
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"Of course, even if we encounter the legendary Erba God Man, they would have run away after seeing the Wolf God."
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:30:57
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In the heart of Huo Feng today, the Wolf God is one of the strongest existences in the world.
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In Huo Feng's heart at that moment, the Wolf God was one of the strongest existences in the world.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:31:19
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Even the legendary Zhu Jiuyou was scared away for several miles by the Wolf God's sword. Who else can do it in this world?
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Even the legendary Zhu Jiuyou was scared away for several miles by the Wolf God's sword. Who else could do that in this world?
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:36:16
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"Anyway, although there are many rumors about the Erba God Man, the rumors don't say that he likes killing. Although it seems strange, he may not be a real evil thing."
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"Anyway, although there are many rumors regarding the Erba God Man, the rumors say that it does not like killing. Although this might seem strange, it might not actually be an evil entity."
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Corrected by: Anita-Krempl , 2024-01-16 21:19:34
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If the so-called Erba God Man encountered the Wolf God and it's really was an evil demon, then the Wolf God would definitely kill it.
Corrected text:
If the so-called Erba God Man encountered the Wolf God and it really was an evil demon, then the Wolf God would definitely kill it.
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:39:35
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If the so-called Erba God Man encounters the Wolf God and it's really an evil demon, then the Wolf God will definitely kill it.
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If the so-called Erba God Man encountered the Wolf God and it's really was an evil demon, then the Wolf God would definitely kill it.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:41:26
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After they arrived at the Mermaid Kingdom, they needed to walk ashore.
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When they arrived at the Mermaid Kingdom, they would need to walk ashore.
Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:40:23
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After they arrive at the Mermaid Kingdom, they need to walk ashore.
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After they arrived at the Mermaid Kingdom, they needed to walk ashore.
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Corrected by: Deleted-User , 2023-09-20 12:43:18
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Without the Bo horse, Huo Feng would have to carry the luggage himself. How could he let this "coolie" go?
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Without the Bo horse, Huo Feng would have to carry the luggage himself. How could he let this laborer go?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-27 08:46:29
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Without the Bo horse, Huo Feng would have to carry the luggage himself. How could he let this "Coolie" go?
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Without the Bo horse, Huo Feng would have to carry the luggage himself. How could he let this "coolie" go?
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