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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:27:46
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But the big black dog that used to scare her had become friendly at this time.
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This big black dog that used to scare her now sounded friendly.
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:28:47
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Although in the past, the girl had a lot of complaints about her eldest uncle and eldest aunt, after all, they were her only family. And at this time, only they could bring her some warmth.
Corrected text:
Although in the past, the girl had a lot of complaints about her eldest uncle and eldest aunt, they were after all her only family. And at this time, only they could bring her some warmth.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:15:50
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Never had a moment when the girl was so eager to go home - to the home that did not belong to her.
Corrected text:
Never before was there a moment when the girl was so eager to go home - to the home that did not belong to her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-05 19:54:15
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This familiar yelling was still brash and nonsensical, but it sounded so cute at the moment, not at all like the usual disgusting her.
Corrected text:
This familiar yelling was still brash and nonsensical, but it sounded so cute at the moment, not at all like the usual which disgusted her.
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Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-05-24 20:28:08
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"New clothes! You have been screaming all afternoon! Where is the money for you to buy new clothes? I will Ground you if you are still shouting."
Corrected text:
"New clothes! You have been screaming all afternoon! Where is the money for you to buy new clothes? I will ground you if you keep shouting."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 22:11:18
Original text:
"New clothes! You have been screaming all afternoon! Where is the money for you to buy new clothes? I will blow you if you are still shouting."
Corrected text:
"New clothes! You have been screaming all afternoon! Where is the money for you to buy new clothes? I will Ground you if you are still shouting."
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:32:44
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But obviously, her threat did not work, and her son was still rolling noisily.
Corrected text:
But obviously, her threat did not work, and her son was still rolling around noisily.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-17 02:09:04
Original text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why I don't get new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why don't I get new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-07-14 08:50:58
Original text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why I do not have new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, so why don't I get new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-07-14 08:50:55
Original text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why I do not have new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why I don't get new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:15:57
Original text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai have new clothes to wear, why I do not have new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
Corrected text:
"I don't care I don't care! I just want new clothes! I just want new clothes! Sister Xiao Ai has new clothes to wear, why I do not have new clothes! I want new clothes!..."
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:35:58
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The money they secretly gave to the village leader, and the money to buy that new set of wedding clothes, had used up all of the family's modest savings. Now she was already in a bad mood, and her son had been making a lot of noise. Even though he was the most spoiled son, she can not stand it.
Corrected text:
The money they secretly gave to the village leader and the money to buy that new set of wedding clothes had used up all of the family's modest savings. Now she was already in a bad mood, and her son was making a lot of noise. Even though she always spoiled him, she could not stand it.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:12
Original text:
The money secretly gave to the village leader, and the money to buy that new set of wedding clothes, had used up all of the family's modest savings. Now she was already in a bad mood, and her son had been making a lot of noise. Even he was the most spoiled son, she can not stand it.
Corrected text:
The money they secretly gave to the village leader, and the money to buy that new set of wedding clothes, had used up all of the family's modest savings. Now she was already in a bad mood, and her son had been making a lot of noise. Even though he was the most spoiled son, she can not stand it.
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:37:01
Original text:
Viciously picking up the little boy, the peasant woman directly slapped him and scolded, "You keep making trouble! If you make any more noise I'll send you to the mountain and let the mountain God eat you up!"
Corrected text:
Viciously picking up the little boy, the peasant woman directly slapped him and scolded, "You keep making trouble! If you make any more noise, I'll send you to the mountain and let the Mountain God eat you up!"
Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-05-24 20:28:17
Original text:
Viciously picked up the little boy, the peasant woman directly slapped him and scolded, "You make trouble again! If you make any more noise I'll send you to the mountain and let the mountain God eat you up!"
Corrected text:
Viciously picking up the little boy, the peasant woman directly slapped him and scolded, "You keep making trouble! If you make any more noise I'll send you to the mountain and let the mountain God eat you up!"
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Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-07-14 08:51:00
Original text:
"Liar! You liar! Dad said that after offering sister Xiao Ai to the Mountain God Master, he will not come and eat me! Sister Xiao Ai has gone instead of me! The God will not eat me!"
Corrected text:
"Liar! You liar! Dad said that after offering sister Xiao Ai to the Lord Mountain God, he will not come and eat me! Sister Xiao Ai has gone instead of me! The Mountain God will not eat me!"
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:37:53
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She stood in the darkness outside the door, listening to the noisy crying in the house. Her expression somewhat dumbfounded.
Corrected text:
She stood in the darkness outside the door, listening to the noisy crying in the house. Her expression was somewhat dumbfounded.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-07 05:25:20
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In the story she knew, the mountain God needed child girls, so the village adults drew lots to decide, and finally she was unfortunately chosen and could only wear the new wedding clothes that her uncle and aunt spent money on and go into the mountain.
Corrected text:
In the story she knew, that the mountain God needed little girls, so the village adults drew lots to decide, and unfortunately she was chosen. She could only wear the new wedding clothes that her uncle and aunt spent money on and go into the mountain.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:16
Original text:
In the story she knew, it was the mountain God needed child girls, so the village adults drew lots to decide, and finally she was unfortunately chosen and could only wear the new wedding clothes that her uncle and aunt spent money on to go into the mountain.
Corrected text:
In the story she knew, the mountain God needed child girls, so the village adults drew lots to decide, and finally she was unfortunately chosen and could only wear the new wedding clothes that her uncle and aunt spent money on and go into the mountain.
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:38:42
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Because she was chosen, her aunt, who had always hated her, took a rare interest in her and made her several delicious meals. The uncle also sighed several times, complaining about his incompetence, said he failed to protect his second brother's daughter, and he felt very guilty.
Corrected text:
Because she was chosen, her aunt, who had always hated her, took a rare interest in her and made her several delicious meals. The uncle also sighed several times, complaining about his incompetence, saying that he failed to protect his second brother's daughter, and that he felt very guilty.
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:40:00
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That's why after Lord Mountain God let her go back, she was so happy to want to run home to share her joy with her aunts and uncles.
Corrected text:
That's why after Lord Mountain God let her go back, she was so happy and wanted to run home to share her joy with her aunts and uncles.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:19
Original text:
That's why after Lord Mountain God let her back, she was so happy to want to run home to share her joy with her aunts and uncles.
Corrected text:
That's why after Lord Mountain God let her go back, she was so happy to want to run home to share her joy with her aunts and uncles.
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:40:22
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"If her aunts and uncles know that she survived, they will surely be very happy too, right?"
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"If her aunts and uncles knew that she survived, they would surely be very happy too, right?"
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Corrected by: Jin-Chen , 2023-01-30 04:40:46
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Originally, she thought so.
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Originally, she had thought so.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-19 03:11:37
Original text:
The girl in was despair.
Corrected text:
The girl was in despair
Corrected by: Kyle-Huntsman-STUDENT , 2022-11-29 04:32:29
Original text:
The girl in was despair.
Corrected text:
The girl despaired.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-23 02:51:08
Original text:
The girl in was despair.
Corrected text:
The girl was in despair.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-16 04:34:52
Original text:
The girl in was despair.
Corrected text:
The girl was in despair
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:54:53
Original text:
The girl was despair.
Corrected text:
The girl in was despair.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:53:56
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The girl's heart had been filled with pathos.
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The girl's heart had been filled with sadness.
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:58
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A quarter of an hour later, the girl, who had been tied up by the villagers, was escorted to the door of the village leader's house.
Corrected text:
A quarter of an hour later, the girl, who had been tied up by the villagers, was escorted to the door of the village chief's house.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:01
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The night sky was still lightning and thunder, and the howling wind was blowing everything in the small village.
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The night sky was still roaring with the sound of thunder, and the howling wind was blowing everything in the small village.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 05:21:22
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The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl being escorted to kneel in front of the crowd, head bowed, desperate mouth sealed by cloth, even the cry of defensive words can not be issued.
Corrected text:
The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl was forced to kneel in front of the crowd, head bowed, her desperate mouth sealed by cloth, even her cries of defensive words could not be spoken.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 05:21:19
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The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl being escorted to kneel in front of the crowd, head bowed, desperate mouth sealed by cloth, even the cry of defensive words can not be issued.
Corrected text:
The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl was forced to kneel in front of the crowd, head bowed, her desperate mouth sealed by cloth, even her cries of defensive words could not be spoken.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:23
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The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl being escorted to kneel in the crowd, head bowed, mouth sealed by cloth desperatly, even the cry of defense words can not be issued.
Corrected text:
The torchlight waving in the gale reflected the expressions of the people in a gloomy and uncertain manner. And the little girl being escorted to kneel in front of the crowd, head bowed, desperate mouth sealed by cloth, even the cry of defensive words can not be issued.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:30
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In the front of the house lived the most authoritative old man in the village.
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In the front of the house where the most authoritative old man in the village lived.
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Corrected by: gramatica , 2022-09-27 02:04:08
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Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Crippler hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "She was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim a life as a vengeful ghost. I was terrified. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow and was not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
Corrected text:
Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Cripple hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "She was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim a life as a vengeful ghost. I was terrified. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow and was not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-05-24 20:28:34
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Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Crippler hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "It was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim a life as an angry ghost. This scared me. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow and was not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
Corrected text:
Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Crippler hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "She was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim a life as a vengeful ghost. I was terrified. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow and was not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
Corrected by: Paxloria , 2022-04-02 13:56:04
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Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Crippler hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "It was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim the life of a severe ghost. This scared me. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow, not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
Corrected text:
Being stared at by the crowd, Ai Crippler hurriedly came out and carefully reported to the village chief, "It was found in front of my house, village chief. I thought at the time that she was back to claim a life as an angry ghost. This scared me. The good thing was that we found that she had a shadow and was not a ghost, so we guessed that she had secretly escaped from the mountain, and immediately caught and brought her to you."
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Corrected by: gramatica , 2022-09-27 02:06:11
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Noticing the village chief's line of sight, Ai Crippler hurriedly defended, "When we caught her, she struggled desperately and said nonsense that she had not escaped secretly and that the mountain God had let her go. She also used her teeth to bite people, in an emergency, we......"
Corrected text:
Noticing the village chief's line of sight, Ai Cripple hurriedly defended, "When we caught her, she struggled desperately and said nonsense that she had not escaped secretly and that the mountain God had let her go. She also used her teeth to bite people, in an emergency, we......"
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:08
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Noticed the village chief's line of sight, Ai Crippler hurriedly defended, "When we caught her, she struggled desperately and said nonsense that she had not escaped privately and that the mountain God had let her back. She also used her teeth to bite people, in an emergency, we......"
Corrected text:
Noticing the village chief's line of sight, Ai Crippler hurriedly defended, "When we caught her, she struggled desperately and said nonsense that she had not escaped secretly and that the mountain God had let her go. She also used her teeth to bite people, in an emergency, we......"
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Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-05-24 20:28:47
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When Ai Cripple shut up and did not say anything, the old man then heaved the cane in his hand and stared at him coldly, "No more? You continue to say, tell me how you hurt the girl who was sacrificed to the Lord Mountain God!"
Corrected text:
When Ai Cripple shut up and did not say anything, the old man then heaved the cane in his hand and stared at him coldly, "No more? Keep talking, tell me how you injured the girl who was sacrificed to the Lord Mountain God!"
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:13
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When Ai Cripple shut up and did not say anything, the old man then heaved the cane in his hand and stared at him coldly, "No more? You continue to say, tell me how you hurt the girl that sacrificed to the Lord Mountain God!"
Corrected text:
When Ai Cripple shut up and did not say anything, the old man then heaved the cane in his hand and stared at him coldly, "No more? You continue to say, tell me how you hurt the girl who was sacrificed to the Lord Mountain God!"
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:17
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The old man's angry questioning made a group of young and strong all dumb, silently bowed their heads, and did not dare to say a word.
Corrected text:
The old man's angry questioning made the group of men all dumbfounded, they silently bowed their heads, and did not dare to say a word.
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Corrected by: gramatica , 2022-09-27 02:08:47
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He slammed his cane in his hand to the ground, he was so angry that his hair stood up straight, "a group of pigs! Doing things without thinking at all!"
Corrected text:
He slammed the cane in his hand to the ground, he was so angry that his hair stood up straight, "A group of pigs! Doing things without thinking at all!"
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:24
Original text:
He slammed his cane in his hand, so angry that his hair was open, "a group of pigs! Doing things without thinking at all!"
Corrected text:
He slammed his cane in his hand to the ground, he was so angry that his hair stood up straight, "a group of pigs! Doing things without thinking at all!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 05:25:18
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"Even if you want to catch her, you can't hurt her! Why can't you think of such a simple thing? If you make her scarred, what if the mountain God doesn't like her and wants us to offer someone else? Which one of your children will be sacrificed then? If you are blamed, can you afford it?"
Corrected text:
"Even if you want to catch her, you can't hurt her! Why can't you think of such a simple thing? If you make her scared, what if the mountain God doesn't like her and wants us to offer someone else? Which one of your children will be sacrificed then? If you are blamed, can you afford it?"
Corrected by: Rodeo-Alt , 2022-05-24 20:29:00
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"Even if you want to catch her, you can't hurt her! Why can't you think of such a simple thing? If you make her scarred, what if the mountain God don't like it and want us to offer someone else? Which one of your children will be sacrificed then? If you are blamed, who can afford it?"
Corrected text:
"Even if you want to catch her, you can't hurt her! Why can't you think of such a simple thing? If you make her scarred, what if the mountain God doesn't like her and wants us to offer someone else? Which one of your children will be sacrificed then? If you are blamed, can you afford it?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 14:29:27
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When the old man had almost finished shouting, everyone asked carefully, "Then, village chief, what should we do next?"
Corrected text:
When the old man had almost finished shouting, someone asked carefully, "Then, village chief, what should we do next?"
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-04-02 13:55:34
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"Yes, village chief, what should we do? This little bitch escaped from the mountain privately, the Lord will be angry, right?"
Corrected text:
"Yes, village chief, what should we do? This little bitch escaped from the mountain secretly, the Lord will be angry, right?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:37
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Everyone was worried, afraid of angering the Mountain God Lord as a result.
Corrected text:
Everyone was worried, afraid of angering the Lord Mountain God as a result.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:43
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But the old man shook his head and fed everyone a piece of mind.
Corrected text:
But the old man shook his head and fed everyone a peace of mind.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 05:27:50
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"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There is no movement until now, perhaps he also did not find out about the little bitch's escape."
Corrected text:
"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There hasn’t been any movement until now, perhaps he has not found out about the little bitch's escape."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 05:27:46
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"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There is no movement until now, perhaps he also did not find out about the little bitch's escape."
Corrected text:
"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There hasn’t been any movement until now, perhaps he has not found out about the little bitch's escape."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:47
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"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There is no movement until now, perhaps he also do not find out about the little bitch's escape."
Corrected text:
"If Lord Mountain God was really angry, our village would have been in big trouble long ago, so how could you guys be worried? There is no movement until now, perhaps he also did not find out about the little bitch's escape."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 14:29:31
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"So let's hurry now and send this little bitch back to the mountain, maybe it's still not too late. This time we send someone to keep watch, and we absolutely can't let this little bitch run away again."
Corrected text:
"So let's hurry now and send this little bitch back to the mountain, maybe it's still not too late. This time we'll send someone to keep watch, we absolutely can't let this little bitch run away again."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:16:51
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"So let's hurry now and send this little bitch back to the mountain, maybe it's still not too late. This time we send someone to keep watching, and we absolutely can't let this little bitch run away again."
Corrected text:
"So let's hurry now and send this little bitch back to the mountain, maybe it's still not too late. This time we send someone to keep watch, and we absolutely can't let this little bitch run away again."
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