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Edited by: tyranoic, Dante-Torn, the-Hellhound, anonymous
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 03:45:41
Original text:
Bai Yan thought fast. He knew this question must be purposeful instead of some random nonsense.
Corrected text:
Bai Yan thought fast. He knew this question must have a purpose instead of just being some random nonsense.
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 03:52:31
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‘Why does her Mood not increase when she knows her bust size increases? Isn’t it good? She doesn’t care about it at all?’
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‘Why does her Mood not increase when she knows that her bust size increased? Wasn’t it a good thing? She doesn’t care about it at all?’
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 03:54:56
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There were more than a dozen humanoid monsters, and their title was “Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentice.”
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There were more than a dozen humanoid monsters, and their title was “Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentices.”
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 03:56:04
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There was a mission requirement: Defeat all Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentice within the specified time and stop a virtual bomb that was about to explode.
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There was a mission requirement: Defeat all of the Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentices within the specified time and stop a virtual bomb that was about to explode.
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 04:07:32
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Psychic Dancer’s ability was powerful. If she used Psychic Domination and commanded others to suicide, she could kill Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentices in seconds.
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Psychic Dancer’s ability was powerful. If she used Psychic Domination and commanded others to suicide, she could kill the Dark Sorcerer’s Apprentices in seconds.
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 04:11:11
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“Well, I’m a bit like a pet now…it’s a pity you can’t understand me, but I think I will make you annoyed if you can.”
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“Well, I’m a bit like a pet now…it’s a pity you can’t understand me, but I think I would've annoyed if you were able to.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 06:28:12
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Maryse waw dead inside again.
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Maryse was dead inside again.
Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 04:11:40
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Maryse dead inside again.
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Maryse waw dead inside again.
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 04:12:05
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‘Better not let me see you, the Savior! Or I’ll definitely…give you a good massage.’
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‘Better not let me see you, Savior! Or I’ll definitely…give you a good massage.’
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-29 04:12:43
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Maryse was walking helplessly, but she was a bit exciting at the same time.
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Maryse was walking helplessly, but she was a bit excited at the same time.
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