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Edited by: anonymous, Snow-Cat, wumbocombo, Miguel-Almeida-Gomes, Xxsafirex, Kuro-Usagi, Paxloria
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 10:15:37
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Although Mrs. Mosconi still had a stern look on her face, she looked at Lord Dio without disgust nor anger, but an appreciation from the bottom of her heart.
Corrected text:
Although Mrs. Mosconi still had a stern look on her face, she didn't look at Lord Dio with disgust or anger, but an appreciation from the bottom of her heart.
Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:27:51
Original text:
Although Mrs. Mosconi still had a stern face, she looked at Lord Dio with no disgust or anger, but an appreciation from the bottom of her heart.
Corrected text:
Although Mrs. Mosconi still had a stern look on her face, she looked at Lord Dio without disgust nor anger, but an appreciation from the bottom of her heart.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:27:53
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"As Your Majesty said, Your Majesty, is indeed a king who transcends the times. It's a pity that I am ignorant. Only you, Your Majesty, can understand the greatness of His Majesty better. My bow is also to thank you for Your Majesty, you have prevented the officers from misunderstanding the pain of Her Majesty!"
Corrected text:
"As Lord Dio said, Her Majesty, is indeed a king who transcends the times. It's a pity that I am ignorant. Only you, Lord Dio, could understand the greatness of Her Majesty best. My bow is also to thank you for Her Majesty, you have prevented the officers from misunderstanding the pain of Her Majesty!"
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:39
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"As Your Majesty said, Your Majesty, is indeed a king who transcends the times. It's a pity that I am ignorant. Only you, Your Majesty, can understand the greatness of His Majesty better. My bow is also to thank you for Your Majesty, you have prevented the officers from understanding. Not to the pain of His Majesty!"
Corrected text:
"As Your Majesty said, Your Majesty, is indeed a king who transcends the times. It's a pity that I am ignorant. Only you, Your Majesty, can understand the greatness of His Majesty better. My bow is also to thank you for Your Majesty, you have prevented the officers from misunderstanding the pain of Her Majesty!"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:27:56
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The Queen of Eternal Night is a king who transcends the times. She does not indulge in enjoyment like other nobles, but wants to rebuild the glory of the empire!
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night is a king who transcends the times. She doesn't indulge in enjoyment like other nobles, but wants to rebuild the glory of the empire!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-19 18:20:07
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Ordinary people can't understand her greatness. Fortunately, Lady Dio Brando saw the radiance that illuminates the world on the queen.
Corrected text:
Ordinary people can't understand her greatness. Fortunately, Mr. Dio Brando saw the radiance that illuminates the world on the queen.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:44
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From compiling the history of the empire to today's speech, Lord Dio has repeatedly prevented the queen from being misunderstood, so that the world can better understand her glory.
Corrected text:
From compiling the history of the empire and today's speech, Lord Dio has repeatedly prevented the queen from being misunderstood, so that the world can better understand her glory.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:27:59
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One only practice without speaking, and the other only speak without practicing. When these two are combined, aren't they invincible?
Corrected text:
One only practices without speaking, and the other only speaks without practicing. When these two are combined, aren't they invincible?
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:47
Original text:
One can only practice without speaking, and the other can only speak without practicing. When these two are combined, aren't they invincible?
Corrected text:
One only practice without speaking, and the other only speak without practicing. When these two are combined, aren't they invincible?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-19 13:19:51
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He rubbed his nose with a puzzled expression.
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She rubbed her nose with a puzzled expression.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:10
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The head maid of trouble for a long time is also a fan of the Queen of Eternal Night.
Corrected text:
The Troublesome head maid was, for quite a long time, also a fan of the Queen of Eternal Night.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:50
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Although the poisonous chicken soup I had just now was to comfort these young officers, it did indeed blow the Queen of Eternal Night.
Corrected text:
Although the poisonous chicken soup I had said just now was to comfort these young officers, it did indeed praise the Queen of Eternal Night.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:02
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After hearing his words, the officers thought he were outspoken historians.
Corrected text:
After hearing his words, the officers thought he was an outspoken historian.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:53
Original text:
After hearing the same words, the officers thought they were outspoken historians.
Corrected text:
After hearing his words, the officers thought he were outspoken historians.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:05
Original text:
but Mrs. Mosconi thought he was Queen's fanaticism.
Corrected text:
but Mrs. Mosconi thought he was one of the Queen's fanatics.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:55
Original text:
After listening to Mrs. Mosconi, she thought she was the Queen's fanaticism.
Corrected text:
but Mrs. Mosconi thought he was Queen's fanaticism.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:09
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And the angle of praising is very fresh, will it be repeated by fanatic fans as a bible?
Corrected text:
And the angle of praise is very fresh, will it be repeated by fanatic fans as a bible?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-20 20:21:24
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It can only be said that in the ears of a thousand listeners, there are a thousand Lord Dio.
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It can only be said that a thousand different versions of Dio are present in the ears of a thousand listeners.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:11
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Mrs. Mosconi's mentality almost exploded, she suspected that the boy was either out of his mind or deliberately playing tricks on himself.
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Mrs. Mosconi's mentality almost exploded, she suspected that the boy was either out of his mind or deliberately playing tricks on herself.
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Corrected by: Paxloria , 2023-05-07 20:15:28
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Mrs. Mosconi frowned, she couldn't fathom what Roger was trying to figure out after spending so much effort tossing around and finally coming to the celebration banquet.
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Mrs. Mosconi frowned, she couldn't fathom what Dio was trying to figure out after spending so much effort tossing around and finally coming to the celebration banquet.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:15
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Roger confirmed that Mrs. Mosconi's tone was sincere and not sarcastic, and could only reply: "Thank you, Mrs. for taking care of me today."
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Roger confirmed that Mrs. Mosconi's tone was sincere and not sarcastic, and could only reply: "Thank you, Miss. for taking care of me today."
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Corrected by: Paxloria , 2023-05-07 20:15:29
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Looking at her back, Roger felt that Mrs. Mosconi must have misunderstood something, but she still didn't know how to explain it.
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Looking at her back, Roger felt that Mrs. Mosconi must have misunderstood something, but he still didn't know how to explain it.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:19:58
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But since he said that the Queen of Eternal Night is a king beyond the times, Mrs. Mosconi believes that he is one of the most learned people in the Empire.&
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But since he said that the Queen of Eternal Night is a king beyond the times, Mrs. Mosconi believes that he is one of the most learned people in the Empire.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:20:01
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It's completely normal for this kind of person to act and he can't understand it.
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It's completely normal for this kind of person to act and she can't understand it.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:18
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This is not someone else, it is Joe star, the priest of the war.
Corrected text:
This is not someone else, it is Joestar, priest of the Goddess of War.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:21
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The goddess of war, Tierra, used to have believers in the human race. After the empire banned the spread of the Church of the Seven Gods, these believers went underground, waiting for the gods to return to teach the arrogant and rude queen.
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The Goddess of War, Tierra, used to have believers in the human race. After the empire banned the spreading of the Church of the Seven Gods doctrine, these believers went underground, waiting for the gods to return to teach the arrogant and rude queen a lesson.
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Corrected by: Kuro-Usagi , 2022-05-25 16:01:02
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Even without surnatural powers, faith can make people lose their minds and become puppets of the gods.
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Even without supernatural powers, faith can make people lose their minds and become puppets of the gods.
Corrected by: Xxsafirex , 2022-05-05 20:48:30
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Even without extraordinary power, faith can make people lose their minds and become puppets of the gods.
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Even without surnatural powers, faith can make people lose their minds and become puppets of the gods.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:27
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With the help of magic, it is easier to cultivate mad believers.
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With the help of magic, it is easier to cultivate fanatical believers.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-19 18:20:03
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A fanatic who has lost his conscience and the bottom line is willing to do anything, even giving up his life, just to gain a place in the kingdom of God after death.
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A fanatic who has lost his conscience and bottom line is willing to do anything, even giving up his life, just to gain a place in the kingdom of God after death.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:54
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Relying on the intelligence of the latent believers, Joestar learned that the Queen of Eternal Night had talked with a young man named Roger Charles before arranging the operation of pretending to be the Restoration Army.
Corrected text:
Relying on the intelligence of the latent believers, Joestar learned that the Queen of Eternal Night had talked with a young man named Dio Brandy before arranging the operation of pretending to be the Restoration Army.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:27:09
Original text:
"Do you think your safe pretending to be a scumbag? The goddess's wisdom guides me!"
Corrected text:
"Do you think you're safe pretending to be a scumbag? The goddess's wisdom guides me!"
Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:32
Original text:
"Do you think it's safe to pretend to be a scumbag? The goddess's wisdom guides me!"
Corrected text:
"Do you think your safe pretending to be a scumbag? The goddess's wisdom guides me!"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:35
Original text:
With the help of magic, Joestar confirmed that Roger had an inseparable relationship with the action of pretending to be the Restoration Army.
Corrected text:
With the help of magic, Joestar confirmed that Roger had an inseparable relationship with the plan of pretending to be the Restoration Army.
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Corrected by: Paxloria , 2023-05-07 20:15:31
Original text:
However, the Charles' House is heavily guarded.
Corrected text:
However, Dio's house is heavily guarded.
Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:37
Original text:
However, Charles' House is heavily guarded.
Corrected text:
However, the Charles' House is heavily guarded.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:41
Original text:
After the Great Library was bombed once by the Queen of Eternal Night, the protective formation was also strengthened several times after the reconstruction, and the magister was still in charge.
Corrected text:
After the Great Library was bombed once by the Queen of Eternal Night, the protective formation was strengthened several times after the reconstruction, and the magister was still in charge.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:49
Original text:
He used magic to steal the hearts of the servants in Charles House. After confirming that Roger was teleported to the Great Library, he arranged an accident and temporarily destroyed the teleportation array in Charles House.
Corrected text:
He used magic to steal the hearts of the servants in Charles House. After confirming that Roger had teleported to the Great Library, he arranged an accident and temporarily destroyed the teleportation array in Charles House.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:52
Original text:
Then Joestar ambushed him on Roger's only way back home.
Corrected text:
Then Joestar prepared to ambush him on Roger's only way back home.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:55
Original text:
Just like the top hunter, Joestar arranged a simple but effective trap for Roger with his mind and heart.
Corrected text:
Just like a top hunter, Joestar arranged a simple but effective trap for Roger with his mind and heart.
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Corrected by: Paxloria , 2023-05-07 20:15:33
Original text:
He drank wine, sat from noon until sunset, and did not see Roger leave the Great Library.
Corrected text:
He drank wine, sat from noon until sunset, and did not see Dio leave the Great Library.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:28:59
Original text:
As the top hunter, you naturally have the top patience.
Corrected text:
As a top hunter, he naturally had great patience.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:02
Original text:
Time has passed, and the lights are on.
Corrected text:
Time continued to pass, and the lights are on.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:06
Original text:
It was until the death of the night again.
Corrected text:
It wasn't until the death of the night again.
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-20 11:29:49
Original text:
Roger walked out of the big library.
Corrected text:
Roger had yet to walk out of the big library.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:09
Original text:
The hunter's patience is running out.
Corrected text:
The hunter's patience was running out.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:12
Original text:
Joestar couldn't believe it, how could a poor younger brother read books in the big library for a day?
Corrected text:
Joestar couldn't believe it, how could a poor younger brother read books in the big library for an entire day?
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:14
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The owner of the small restaurant picked up the bag and weighed it, he was stupid.
Corrected text:
The owner of the small restaurant picked up the bag and weighed it, he was stupefied.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:17
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These gold coins are enough to buy five shops like that.
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These gold coins would enough to buy five shops like that.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:19
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This person pays so much money just to wait in his shop, the picture is huge...
Corrected text:
This person paid so much money just to wait in his shop, the picture is huge...
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:22
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He has to run quickly to avoid being splattered with blood!
Corrected text:
He ran quickly to avoid being splattered with blood!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 20:51:53
Original text:
"I won't lose to a dude, not to mention that this night will be very lively... Hehe, I see how long you can endure it!"
Corrected text:
"I won't lose to a boy. Not to mention, this night will be very lively... Hehe, we’ll see how long you can endure it!"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:28
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He has already made up his mind that he will be more patient with that Roger today!
Corrected text:
He had already made up his mind that he will be more patient with that Roger today!
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-20 11:29:32
Original text:
Fighting wits and courage, he can't lose!
Corrected text:
Fighting, wits and courage, he can't lose!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 11:29:35
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After all, he was the top champion of the Breath Holding Competition!
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After all, he was the top practitioner of the Hamon Technique!
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