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Edited by: anonymous, Snow-Cat, booho-hahaha, Top-Kek, IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S, wumbocombo, trek-backs, Junaavicii
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:16:30
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Chapter 23 The first day of serving the queen
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Chapter 23: The first day of serving the queen
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:09
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But they didn't realize that the queen was peeking at Dio's distraction.
Corrected text:
But they didn't realize that the queen was peeking at Dio.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:12
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Even if I found out, I wouldn't think about men and women easily.
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Even if they found out, they wouldn't think about relationship between men and women.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:14
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After all, the matter of marrying the prince has been mentioned since she took the throne.
Corrected text:
After all, the matter of the Queen marriage has been discussed since she took the throne.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:17
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The stability of the feudal dynasty, the continuity of the blood of the emperor, and the cultivation of qualified heirs to the crown prince are major events.
Corrected text:
The stability of the empire, the continuity of the blood of the emperor, and nurturing qualified heirs to be the crown prince are all important.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:23
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It's just that the Queen of Evernight is too strong, and she had arranged for her to meet young talents and peerless handsome men before, but they didn't arouse her interest.
Corrected text:
It's just that the Queen of Evernight is too strong. She had arranged to meet with many young talents and peerless handsome men before, but they didn't catch her interest.
Corrected by: booho-hahaha , 2022-04-05 18:19:20
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It's just that the Queen of Evernight is too strong, and she had arranged for her to meet young talents and peerless handsome men before, but they didn't arouse her interest.
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It's just that the Queen of Eternal Night is too strong, and she had arranged for her to meet young talents and peerless handsome men before, but they didn't arouse her interest.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:31
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Besides, a powerful magician can't live forever. If you want to extend your lifespan for three to five hundred years, is it so easy?
Corrected text:
Besides even a powerful magician can't live forever. Is it so easy to extend your lifespan for three to five hundred years?
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:36:56
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But if the Queen wanted, she could transforms to Lich Queen.
Corrected text:
But if the Queen wanted, she could transform into a Lich Queen.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:34
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If she wanted, she could even go the Lich Queen route.
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But if the Queen wanted, she could transforms to Lich Queen.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:36
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Everyone believed that the queen had no interest in matters of men and women, and only liked wars and magic.
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Everyone believed that the queen had no interest in relationship between men and women, and only liked wars and magic.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:00
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She know that the Queen once had a longing for a beautiful love.
Corrected text:
She knew that the Queen once had a longing for a beautiful love.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:40
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Knowing that she once had a longing for a beautiful love.
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She know that the Queen once had a longing for a beautiful love.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:55
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It is admirable for Dior to be able to write the tenth volume of the history of the empire under pressure and make the historical truth public.
Corrected text:
It is admirable for Dior to be able to write the tenth volume of the History of the Empire under pressure and make the historical truth public.
Corrected by: booho-hahaha , 2022-04-05 18:19:26
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It is admirable for Dior to be able to write the tenth volume of the history of the empire under pressure and make the historical truth public.
Corrected text:
It is admirable for Dio to be able to write the tenth volume of the history of the empire under pressure and make the historical truth public.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:59
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The queen had lost her temper to an extreme level.
Corrected text:
The queen had become hardheaded.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-06 12:49:54
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But in the end, it was Dior who persuaded the queen.
Corrected text:
But in the end, it was Dio who persuaded the queen.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:51
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This is an immortal record!
Corrected text:
This is unprecedented!
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:03
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Angelina believes that by reasoning alone, it is impossible to convince the Queen of Eternal Night, who believes that a big fist is a truth.
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Angelina believes that by reasoning alone, it is impossible to convince the Queen of Eternal Night, who believes that a biggest fist is the truth.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:19:47
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As long as there is a glimmer of hope, she hopes that there will be one more Prince Dio in the empire.
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As long as there is a glimmer of hope, she hopes that Dio will become the empire's prince.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 18:10:43
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And when he becomes a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade Her Majesty to fight more wars and kill lots of people!
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And when he becomes a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade Her Majesty to lower on fighting more wars and death of people!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-05 15:25:29
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Roger didn't know that his sister was taking it down on the memo, intending to push his younger brother into the embrace of the queen.
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Roger didn't know that his sister was taking it down on the memo, intending to push her younger brother into the embrace of the queen.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:07
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If Angelina hadn't arranged for him to dig coal, would he have gone to the Great Library and got involved in the crap work of editing the History of the Empire and couldn't get away?
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If Angelina hadn't arranged for him to mine coal, would he have gone to the Great Library and gotten involved in the crap work of editing the History of the Empire and be unable to escape?
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:02
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If he had known, he would have complained that.
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If he had known, he would be enraged.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:10
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If Angelina hadn't arranged for him to dig coal, he would have gone to the Great Library, and then got involved in the crap work of editing the history of the empire and couldn't get away?
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If Angelina hadn't arranged for him to dig coal, would he have gone to the Great Library and got involved in the crap work of editing the History of the Empire and couldn't get away?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:12
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Drive further, and he's going to fall asleep.
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Had the meeting continued, he would have fallen asleep.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-12 20:56:03
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"My minister, please retire."
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"My ministers, you may retire."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:16
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The Minister of History, who was ranked last, naturally walked in last.
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The Minister of History who was ranked last naturally walked out last too.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:22
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The work of editing the history of the empire has been completed. Afterward, he became an idle civil servant drinking tea and reading newspapers.
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The work of editing the History of the Empire has been completed. Afterward, he can became an idle civil servant drinking tea and reading newspapers.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-05 15:25:33
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With his understanding of the system deepening, Roger felt that even if he could not get rid of his identity as Dio, he could still find new methods of loafing around. Also, he could find new ways to regain& the system's reward.
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With his understanding of the system deepening, Roger felt that even if he could not get rid of his identity as Dio, he could still find new methods of loafing around. Also, he could find new ways to regain the system's reward.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:36
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"Master Dio, please stay."
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"Lord Dio please wait."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:25
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"Have you forgotten that the Minister of History wants to record my words and deeds to compile the eleventh volume of the history of the empire?"
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"Have you forgotten that the Minister of History need to record my words and deeds to compile the eleventh volume of the History of the Empire?"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:27
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"This... the minister obeys the order."
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"This... the minister obeys."
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:10
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But it's the first day in the office, it is not easy to find an excuse to slip away.
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But it was his first day in office, it is not easy to find an excuse to slip away.
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But on the first day in the office, it is not easy to find an excuse to slip away.
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But it's the first day in the office, it is not easy to find an excuse to slip away.
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Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:13:00
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She could hear Lord Brando's resistance, and she was reluctant to stay in the palace like this.
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She could hear Lord Brando's resistance, and he was reluctant to stay in the palace like this.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:13
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Your Majesty is so active, maybe she will be able to see Prince Dio Shelley soon?
Corrected text:
Her Majesty is so active, maybe she will be able to see Prince Dio Shelley soon?
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:57
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But, "accompanying is the longest confession of love"!
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It's said that "Accompanying is the confession of love"!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-06 09:26:06
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Your Majesty is so active, maybe he will be able to see Prince Dio Shelley soon?
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Your Majesty is so active, maybe she will be able to see Prince Dio Shelley soon?
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-18 12:37:16
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I must find the right opportunity to play assists and get Prince Dio a good deal.
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I must find the right opportunity to play assistant, and get Prince Dio a good deal.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:47
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I must find the right opportunity to play assists and sell Prince Dio a good deal.
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I must find the right opportunity to play assists and get Prince Dio a good deal.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:44
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Hey, these things, that naive Margaret would never have imagined!
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Hey, that naive Margaret would never have imagined these things!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 16:50:09
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And when he becomes a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade Her Majesty to fight fewer wars and kill fewer people!
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And when he becomes a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade Her Majesty to fight more wars and kill lots of people!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:20:34
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When I become a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade the queen more, and together persuade His Majesty to fight fewer wars and kill fewer people!
Corrected text:
When he become a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade the queen, and together persuade Her Majesty to fight fewer wars and kill fewer people!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-06 09:26:36
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(this is a correction for the line above this)And when he become a prince, I have to ask him to help me persuade Her Majesty to fight fewer wars and kill fewer people!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:01
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It's a cabinet meeting in the morning.
Corrected text:
In the morning there's a cabinet meeting .
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:04
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Afterward, he received a governor who had entered the palace to report his duties and had a banquet in the palace.
Corrected text:
Afterward, the Queen received a governor who had entered the palace to report his duties and had a banquet in the palace.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:06
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In the afternoon, he went to the outskirts of the mysterious capital to visit a newly opened highway and reward the construction workers.
Corrected text:
In the afternoon, the Queen went to the outskirts of the capital to visit a newly opened highway and reward the construction workers.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:09
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Then he went to the Mage Tower of the Secret Law Society to review the progress of several magic experiments.
Corrected text:
Then the Queen went to the Mage Tower of the Secret Law Society to review the progress of several magic experiments.
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Corrected by: Top-Kek , 2022-04-08 10:36:46
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[Compared to hear someone like him is just a lowly worm. 】
Corrected text:
[Compared to her someone like him is just a lowly worm. 】
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:15
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He took the time to meet with several members of parliament and dismissed their rude demands on behalf of his family.
Corrected text:
the Queen took the time to meet with several members of parliament and dismissed their rude demands on behalf of his family.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:22
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Dinner was at the house of a traditional marquis.
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Dinner was at the house of a long standing marquis.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:25
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The eldest son of the Marquis admired the Queen to the point of madness, and Roger listened to the speech for two hours.
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The eldest son of the Marquis admired the Queen, and Roger listened to the speech for two hours.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:12
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[Someone like him is such a humble maggot. 】
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[Compared to her someone like him is just a lowly worm. 】
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-16 10:06:49
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Roger's inner reaction was, "This is it? ].
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Roger's inner reaction was, [Is this it?].
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:28
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Follow me, shouldn't you be sleepy or tired, and you should be strong and perform well?
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When following me, you're either sleepy or tired. Shouldn't you be strong and perform well?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:30
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You bastard used to fool around, and something useful always popped up in your heart.
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This bastard used to fool around, and something useful always popped up in your heart.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-05 18:21:33
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Why is it that the style is different now that I have finished a history book?
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Why is it that the style is different now that you have finished the history book?
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