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Edited by: Kastle, YACATECT, anonymous, crisiscore38, hao-farah, Henry, sweety-boy
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Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-06-05 21:48:42
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"Ding, Congratulations, my dear master is cruel and very in line with the villain's code of conduct.
Corrected text:
Ding! "Congratulations, my dear master is cruel and very in line with the villain's code of conduct."
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Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-06-05 21:48:51
Original text:
Unlock a new villain achievement: First Blood.
Corrected text:
Villain Achievement Unlocked: First Blood.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:21
Original text:
Obtained achievement reward. Special Effect: Execution Skill (Phoenix), Land a finishing blow on a weakened enemy. Regardless of what attack method and skill you're using, it will be attached with a unique and cool "Phoenix" effect.
Corrected text:
Obtained achievement reward "Execution Skill" (Phoenix's special effect). Land a finishing blow on a weakened enemy. Regardless of what attack method and skill you're using, it will be attached with a unique and classy "Phoenix" effect.
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-05-26 15:14:44
Original text:
Get an achievement reward: Special Effect of Execution Skill (Phoenix), launch the last attack on the enemy who was already unable to fight. No matter what attack method and skill you're using, it will be attached with a unique and cool "Phoenix" effect.
Corrected text:
Obtained achievement reward. Special Effect: Execution Skill (Phoenix), Land a finishing blow on a weakened enemy. Regardless of what attack method and skill you're using, it will be attached with a unique and cool "Phoenix" effect.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
"Even if you have to be the villain, you should be the coolest one."
Corrected text:
"Even if you have to be a villain, you should be the coolest one."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
After hammering more than ten times, Rin threw the nail hammer aside and took a long breath. It seemed that his mood had cooled down.
Corrected text:
After hammering him more than ten times, Rin threw the nail hammer aside and took a deep breath. It seemed that his anger had cooled down.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:23:38
Original text:
After hammering more than ten times, Rin threw the nail hammer aside and took a long breath. It seemed that his mood slowed down.
Corrected text:
After hammering more than ten times, Rin threw the nail hammer aside and took a long breath. It seemed that his mood had cooled down.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
He wiped the blood off his face with his sleeve. Instead of looking at the bloody guy on the ground, Rin said to Elise behind him, "Silly elk, use Purify."
Corrected text:
He then wiped the blood off his face with his sleeve; rather than looking at the bloody guy on the ground, Rin said to Elise behind him, "Silly elk use Purify."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:23:46
Original text:
Wipe the blood off his face with his sleeve. Instead of looking at the bloody guy on the ground, Rin said to Elise behind him, "Silly elk, use Purify."
Corrected text:
He wiped the blood off his face with his sleeve. Instead of looking at the bloody guy on the ground, Rin said to Elise behind him, "Silly elk, use Purify."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
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The soft light surrounded Rin, and the pure holy power immediately cleaned up the blood on Rin's body, and even calmed down his somewhat messy mood.
Corrected text:
The soft light surrounded Rin, and the pure holy power immediately cleaned up the blood on Rin's body, and even calmed down his disorientated mood.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:37
Original text:
He didn't know the result was the effect of the holy power, or whether he has the same blood as Lin Wuyue, which makes him different from ordinary people.
Corrected text:
He didn't know if the result was the effect of the holy power, or if it was because he has the same blood as Lin Wuyue, which makes him different from ordinary people.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
Original text:
He didn't know whether it was the effect of the holy power, or whether he has the same blood as Lin Wuyue, which makes him different from ordinary people.
Corrected text:
He didn't know the result was the effect of the holy power, or whether he has the same blood as Lin Wuyue, which makes him different from ordinary people.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:40
Original text:
As for his bloodline, in fact, he also wondered why his parents, who were traveling to other countries for their wedding anniversaries… could give birth to an evil god.
Corrected text:
As for his bloodline, in fact, he also wondered why his parents, who were traveling to other countries for their wedding anniversary… could give birth to an evil god.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
As for his bloodline, in fact, he also wondered why his parents, who were traveling to other countries for their wedding anniversary… could give birth to an evil god.
Corrected text:
As for his bloodline, in fact, he also wondered why his parents, who were traveling to other countries for their wedding anniversaries… could give birth to an evil god.
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:31:19
Original text:
'No, no, I can't dwell to deep into it! I need to get back to the point!'
Corrected text:
'No, no, I can't dwell too deep into it! I need to get back to the point!'
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
'No, no, I can't go deep into it! Get back to the point!'
Corrected text:
'No, no, I can't dwell to deep into it! I need to get back to the point!'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
Rin didn't feel any resistance when he killed for the first time, he only felt a little disgust when he looked at the body.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't feel any resistance when he killed for the first time, he only felt a little disgust when he looked at the deceased body.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:32:54
Original text:
Rin didn't feel any resistance when he killed for the first time, he only felt a little disgusting when he looked at the body.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't feel any resistance when he killed for the first time, he only felt a little disgust when he looked at the body.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
Elise purified the nail hammer, and then put it back into her magic space.
Corrected text:
Elise proceeded to purify the nail hammer, before putting it back into her magic space.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:33:02
Original text:
Elise purified the nail hammer, and then put it back to her magic space.
Corrected text:
Elise purified the nail hammer, and then put it back into her magic space.
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-05-22 12:48:56
Original text:
Elise purified the nail hammer by the way, and then took it back to her magic space.
Corrected text:
Elise purified the nail hammer, and then put it back to her magic space.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't mean to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out her sword and finished the other one.
Corrected text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't want to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out her sword and finished the other one.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:33:16
Original text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't mean to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out the sword and finished the other one.
Corrected text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't mean to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out her sword and finished the other one.
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-05-23 09:06:13
Original text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't mean to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out the sword and solved the other one.
Corrected text:
The Kuudere hero waited for a while. Seeing that Rin didn't mean to continue to "do" it, she resolutely took out the sword and finished the other one.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:38:08
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Rin suddenly reacted. A great opportunity to show the newly obtained "Phoneix" effect is gone!
Corrected text:
Rin suddenly reacted. A great opportunity to show the newly obtained "Phoenix" effect is gone!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
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Rin nodded, releasing magic to destroy the corpses, while still thinking.
Corrected text:
Rin nodded, releasing his magic to destroy the corpses while still thinking.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:38:26
Original text:
Rin nodded, releasing magic to destroy the corpse, while still thinking.
Corrected text:
Rin nodded, releasing magic to destroy the corpses, while still thinking.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:38:31
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Obviously, the Evil Wizard had seen Yuki just now, and it was very likely that he just escaped from Yuki's pursuit, so he hated Yuki so much.
Corrected text:
Obviously, the Evil Wizard had seen Yuki just now, and it was very likely that he just escaped from Yuki's pursuit, so he hated Yuki very much.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
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Then he suddenly reacted, jumped in place, and bared his teeth, "Not at all! The fake swordmaster is also a member of my Fenix family. It was to prevent someone from using her to discredit my family!"
Corrected text:
Then he suddenly reacted jumping in place, and bared his teeth, "Not at all! The fake swordmaster is also a member of my Fenix family. It was to prevent someone from using her to discredit my family!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:38:36
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Then he suddenly reacted, jumped in place, and bared his teeth, "Not at all! The fake swordmaster is also a member of my Fenix family. I was to prevent someone from using her to discredit my family!"
Corrected text:
Then he suddenly reacted, jumped in place, and bared his teeth, "Not at all! The fake swordmaster is also a member of my Fenix family. It was to prevent someone from using her to discredit my family!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
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He said, waved his hand, and turned to leave, "That stupid woman gave me so much homework, sooner or later, I will let her understand how horrible I am!"
Corrected text:
He said waving his hand, then turned to leave, "That stupid woman gave me so much homework, sooner or later I will let her understand how horrible I am!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:46:46
Original text:
He said, waved his hand, and turned to leave, "That stupid woman gave me so much homework, soon or later, I will let her understand how horrible I am!"
Corrected text:
He said, waved his hand, and turned to leave, "That stupid woman gave me so much homework, sooner or later, I will let her understand how horrible I am!"
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-05-22 12:49:09
Original text:
He said, waved his hand, and turned to leave, "That stupid guy gave me so much homework, soon or later, I will let her understand how horrible am I!"
Corrected text:
He said, waved his hand, and turned to leave, "That stupid woman gave me so much homework, soon or later, I will let her understand how horrible I am!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
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Emilia was tired and yawning all the time. She looked back at a tree not far away and staggered to keep up with them.
Corrected text:
Emilia was tired and yawned all the time. She looked back at a tree not too far away and staggered to keep up with them.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:38:48
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Emilia was tired and yawned all the time. She looked back at a tree not far away and staggered to keep up with them.
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Emilia was tired and yawning all the time. She looked back at a tree not far away and staggered to keep up with them.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:39:03
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Yuki tried to restore her composure, but her heart pounded so fast that it was about to jump out, so she had to press it with her hand.
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Yuki tried to restore her composure, but her heart was pounding so fast that it was about to jump out, so she had to press it with her hand.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
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In response to the expectation in her heart, Yuki regained her composure, and her eyes became serious and indifferent again.
Corrected text:
In response to the expectations in her heart, Yuki regained her composure, and her eyes became serious and indifferent again.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:39:19
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In response to the expectation in her heart, Yuki returned to her mind, and her eyes became serious and indifferent again.
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In response to the expectation in her heart, Yuki regained her composure, and her eyes became serious and indifferent again.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:39:25
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Such a dangerous task is not available to those students, so Yuki took it in person, searched, and destroyed a sacrificial stronghold all the way.
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Such a dangerous task is not available to those students, so Yuki took it in person, searched, and thoroughly destroyed a sacrificial stronghold.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:49:06
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Missing two "small fish", she tracked them down all the way here. She happened to see the fighting among the villains and her brother's team. She hid and was ready to go out to help her brother in case of an accident.
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Missing two "small fishes", she tracked them down all the way here. She happened to see the fighting among the villains and her brother's team. She hid and was ready to go out to help her brother in case of an accident.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:39:53
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Missing two "small fish", she tracked them all the way here. She happened to see the fighting among the giaours and her brother's team. She hid and was ready to go out to help her brother in case of an accident.
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Missing two "small fish", she tracked them down all the way here. She happened to see the fighting among the villains and her brother's team. She hid and was ready to go out to help her brother in case of an accident.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:40:01
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She never thought that there was really an "accident", and it was such a beautiful accident that she would never forget.
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She never thought that an "accident" would actually happen, and it was such a beautiful accident that she would never forget it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
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She still has her own tasks to complete, and as a sister, she should let her brother have his own growth space.
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She still has her own tasks to complete, and as a sister, she should let her brother have his own room to grow.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:52
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Today, they crusaded a lot of magical beasts, so they are a little tired.
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They slew a lot of magical beasts today, so they were tired.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
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"What… sleep together! Don't say those kinds of ambiguous words!" Rin raised his voice, "Learning without stopping is the basic ethic of a student! Don't you understand?!"
Corrected text:
"What… sleep together! Don't say those kinds of ambiguous words!" Rin raised his voice, "Learning without stopping is the basic responsibility of a student! Don't you understand?!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-16 15:49:09
Original text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero underestimated her ability to stay awake. In less than ten minutes, she had made an even little whir.
Corrected text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero overestimated her ability to stay awake. In less than ten minutes, she had even begun to lightly snore.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
Original text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero underestimated her ability to fall asleep. In less than ten minutes, she had made an even little whir.
Corrected text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero underestimated her ability to stay awake. In less than ten minutes, she had made an even little whir.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:40:14
Original text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero underestimated her sleep ability. In less than ten minutes, she had made an even little whir.
Corrected text:
It's a pity that Miss Hero underestimated her ability to fall asleep. In less than ten minutes, she had made an even little whir.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:23
Original text:
Elise's ahoge hair turned around as she had an idea. She suddenly lay on Rin's back and put her hands around his neck.
Corrected text:
Elise's ahoge hair turned around as she suddenly had an idea. She laid on Rin's back and put her hands around his neck.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:40:23
Original text:
Elise's ahoge hair turned around and had an idea. She suddenly lay on Rin's back and put her hands around his neck.
Corrected text:
Elise's ahoge hair turned around as she had an idea. She suddenly lay on Rin's back and put her hands around his neck.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:51
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Rin felt the "inertia" behind him, and suddenly his whole body grew stiff. His face turned hot and he had to move his ass away.
Corrected text:
Rin felt the "impact" behind him, and suddenly his whole body grew stiff. His face turned hot and he had to move his ass away.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:40:30
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Rin felt the "inertia" behind him, and suddenly his whole body was stiff. His face turned hot and he had to move his ass away.
Corrected text:
Rin felt the "inertia" behind him, and suddenly his whole body grew stiff. His face turned hot and he had to move his ass away.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:40:36
Original text:
"So it won't affect little Rin!"
Corrected text:
"That way it won't affect little Rin!"
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