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Edited by: Kastle, anonymous, Karma-Kinsmen, Green-Thing, Henry, tyranoic, Yozakura-_, Irushia, GrowArmyGt-Vo
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:00
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"Senior, how come you don't look happy at all when you see me?"
Corrected text:
"Junior, how come you don't look happy at all when you see me?"
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Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-04-17 16:06:38
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Rin said with a& leathery smile on his face, "I'm not as forgetful as you are, didn't we make a deal last time?"
Corrected text:
Rin said with a leathery smile on his face, "I'm not as forgetful as you are, didn't we make a deal last time?"
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Corrected by: Green-Thing , 2022-04-24 08:43:17
Original text:
[This demon king, she should conclude that I suspect her, but she doesn't know that I already know she is the demon king, and now is still testing me.]
Corrected text:
[This demon king, she should have concluded that I already suspect her, but she doesn't know that I already know she is the demon king, and is now still testing me.]
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Corrected by: Green-Thing , 2022-04-24 08:43:30
Original text:
[So I don't need to panic now, just act like a braInless villain! Don't panic!]
Corrected text:
[So I don't need to panic now, just act like a brainless villain! Don't panic!]
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Corrected by: GrowArmyGt-Vo , 2022-07-14 21:43:07
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"Junior, last time I didn't mean to do it, you wouldn't be so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did this and that kind of things to me."
Corrected text:
"Junior, last time I didn't mean to do it, you aren't so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did that kind of things to me."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:33:59
Original text:
"Junior, last time I didn't mean to do it, you wouldn't be so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did this kind and that kind of things to me."
Corrected text:
"Junior, last time I didn't mean to do it, you wouldn't be so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did this and that kind of things to me."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:39:55
Original text:
"Senior, last time I didn't mean to do it, wouldn't you be so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did this kind and that kind of things to me."
Corrected text:
"Junior, last time I didn't mean to do it, you wouldn't be so narrow-minded, right? Obviously you did this kind and that kind of things to me."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:07
Original text:
"Less nonsense, don't pretend. Although I don't know what you want to do by pretending to be this look, I do feel physically and mentally uncomfortable. Say, what do you want me to do?"
Corrected text:
"Less nonsense, don't pretend. Although I don't know what you want to do by pretending to be this type, I do feel physically and mentally uncomfortable. Say, what do you want me to do?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:12
Original text:
Suyu shook her head. The little guy obviously scared to death, but he still tried hard to look like an evil villain.
Corrected text:
Suyu shook her head. The little guy was obviously scared to death, but he still tried hard to look like an evil villain.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:23
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"Bullshit! Damn liar! I have zero relationships with you!"
Corrected text:
"Bullshit! Damn liar! I have zero relationship with you!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:16
Original text:
"Bullshit! Damn liar! I have zero relationships with you!"
Corrected text:
"Bullshit! Damn liar! I have zero relationship with you!"
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-13 09:56:31
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Rin instinctively shivered slightly and frowned, "Just say something, stop touching me!"
Corrected text:
Rin instinctively shivered slightly and frowned, "Just say what you want, stop touching me!"
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
Original text:
Rin instinctively shivered slightly and frowned, "Say something, don't move your hands!"
Corrected text:
Rin instinctively shivered slightly and frowned, "Just say something, stop touching me!"
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-07-09 17:14:55
Original text:
Coming to Rin's ear, Suyu whispered and asked, "The important thing is … do you want to work for me?!"
Corrected text:
Coming to Rin's ear, Suyu whispered and asked, "The important thing is … do you want to work for me?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:30
Original text:
Came to Rin's ear, Suyu whispered and asked, "The important thing is … do you want to work for me?!"
Corrected text:
Coming to Rin's ear, Suyu whispered and asked, "The important thing is … do you want to work for me?!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:42
Original text:
The demon king came up with a straight shot.
Corrected text:
The demon king came up with a direct proposal.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:11
Original text:
[I didn't expect …% has changed, she even wants to recruit me. No, absolutely not, or everything will be messed up, I haven't …]
Corrected text:
[I didn't expect she has changed, she even wants to recruit me. No, absolutely not, or everything will be messed up, I haven't …]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
Original text:
Thinking of this, Rin immediately cut off the thought and said with a contemptuous look, "Are you dreaming? I, the future Grand Duke of Fenix, am going to work for you as a fellow in your store?"
Corrected text:
Thinking of this, Rin immediately cut off the thought and said with a contemptuous look, "Are you dreaming? Me?! The future Grand Duke of Fenix, am going to work for you as a worker in your store?"
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Corrected by: GrowArmyGt-Vo , 2022-07-14 21:43:08
Original text:
"Don't act. You know this is not what I mean."
Corrected text:
"Don't act like that. You know that isn't what I meant."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
Original text:
Suyu recalled the members of the Fenix family, putting her hands on his shoulders, and said with a smile, "I'm not in a hurry, you can take your time to consider, but I must remind you of the mistake in the previous statement, that is, you are not doomed to be the Grand Duke Fenix. Your sister is a rare Sword Master, she should be more qualified than you."
Corrected text:
Suyu recalled the members of the Fenix family, putting her hands on his shoulders, and said with a smile, "I'm not in a hurry, you can take your time to consider, but I must remind you of the mistake in the previous statement, that is, you are not fated to be the Grand Duke Fenix. Your sister is a rare Sword Master, she is more qualified than you."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
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"Poof!"
Corrected text:
"Ppfffft-!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:42
Original text:
The Demon King didn't hold back a mouthful of water and sprayed it out.
Corrected text:
The Demon King didn't hold back the mouthful of water and sprayed it out.
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-04-12 15:49:14
Original text:
What's going on? Why are you suddenly recalling the circumference in your heart? What's wrong with your head?
Corrected text:
What's going on? Why are you suddenly recalling the digits of pi in your heart? What's wrong with your head?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:40:59
Original text:
Rin succeeded in stopping his thoughts about Yuki, looked at Suye who almost choked with contempt, and put his hand into his pocket with an arrogant look.
Corrected text:
Rin succeeded in stopping his thoughts about Yuki, looked at Suyu, who almost choked with contempt, and put his hand into his pocket with an arrogant look.
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-13 09:56:37
Original text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she will naturally lose her qualification. All right, is that all you want to tell me?"
Corrected text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she will naturally lose her qualification. Alright, is that all you want to tell me?"
Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-13 09:56:34
Original text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she will naturally lose her qualification. All right, is that all you want to tell me?"
Corrected text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she will naturally lose her qualification. Alright, is that all you want to tell me?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:41:51
Original text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she would naturally lose her qualification. All right, is that all you want to tell me?"
Corrected text:
"Stupid woman, when I dig up my sister's secret, she will naturally lose her qualification. All right, is that all you want to tell me?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:41:57
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Rin waved his hand, "If you don't have other things to bother me, I will leave first."
Corrected text:
Rin waved his hand, "If you don't have other things to bother me with, I will leave first."
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Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-04-17 16:06:46
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[What the hell is this? Why is it in my spatial ring? Damn, is this woman trying to frame me?
Corrected text:
[What the hell is this? Why is it in my spatial ring? Damn, is this woman trying to frame me?]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
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"Although you took my things, I also received the music card from you. Just regard it as an exchange of love tokens. You can leave now, remember to consider my proposal. I am very strong, and if you work for me, I can give you anything you want. Hum?"
Corrected text:
"Although you took my things, I also received the music card from you. Just regard it as an exchange of love tokens. You can leave now, and remember to consider my proposal. I am very strong, and if you work for me, I can give you anything you want. Hmm?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:11
Original text:
Rin naturally wouldn't accept her thing. He was worrying that there would be a conspiracy behind it.
Corrected text:
Rin naturally wouldn't accept her proposal. He was worried that there was some kind of sinister scheme behind it.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:14:06
Original text:
Rin naturally wouldn't accept her thing.& He was worrying that there would be a conspiracy behind it.
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Rin naturally wouldn't accept her thing. He was worrying that there would be a conspiracy behind it.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:42:07
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The demon king thought about it, contacted the situation with his intermittently shielded inner thoughts, and vaguely felt that Rin's performance was a little deliberate.
Corrected text:
The demon king thought about it, linked the situation to his intermittently shielded inner thoughts, and vaguely felt that Rin's performance was a little deliberate.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 21:54:33
Original text:
Rin waved his hand with an expansive look, "Go ahead, waste Hero! I will pay the money for you!"
Corrected text:
Rin waved his hand with an expansive look, "Go ahead, waste Hero! I will use my money to pay for you!"
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