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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:31:36
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"I think you really misunderstood me, he and I, in fact, is that kind of relationship …"
Corrected text:
"I think you really misunderstood me, he and I, in fact, are in that kind of relationship …"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 08:46:09
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Suyu said. Although her expression was still shy incomparable, the meaning of the words was very bold.
Corrected text:
Suyu said. Although her expression was still incomparably shy, the meaning of the words was very bold.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:31:43
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Rin wrenched free of her hand, then coldly snorted, "I was just making fun, don't think that you can have any relationship with me."
Corrected text:
Rin wrenched free of her hand, then coldly snorted, "I was just making fun of you, don't think that you can have any relationship with me."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:09
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Sherlock looked left and right and said helplessly, "This is the library."
Corrected text:
Sherlock looked left and right and said helplessly, "But, this is the library..."
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-06-24 09:00:42
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Suyu couldn't help but cover her mouth and snicker, coming up to his ear, "Hmm, you're not as innocent as your look."
Corrected text:
Suyu couldn't help but cover her mouth and snicker, coming up to his ear, "Hmm, you're not as innocent as you look."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 20:48:49
Original text:
Suyu couldn't help but cover her mouth and snicker, coming up to his ear, "Hmm, you're not so innocent as your look."
Corrected text:
Suyu couldn't help but cover her mouth and snicker, coming up to his ear, "Hmm, you're not as innocent as your look."
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-16 09:04:26
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"Oh, you have done this thing and that thing, you still don't dare admit it, hey, in that case, I will help my classmate Sherlock teach you a lesson."
Corrected text:
"Oh, after everything you've done, you still don't dare admit it? In that case, I will help my classmate Sherlock teach you a lesson."
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-06-24 09:00:55
Original text:
"Oh, you have done this thing and that thing, you still don't dare admit it, hey, in that case, I will help Classmate Sherlock to teach you a lesson."
Corrected text:
"Oh, you have done this thing and that thing, you still don't dare admit it, hey, in that case, I will help my classmate Sherlock teach you a lesson."
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-06-24 09:01:09
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She was a little worried about this little guy. After all, this guy had already sighed in his heart that he was going to be beaten up.
Corrected text:
She was a little worried about this little guy. After all, this guy had already accepted in his heart that he was going to be beaten up.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 08:41:22
Original text:
She was a little worried about this little guy. After all, this guy has been sighed in his heart that he was going to be beaten up.
Corrected text:
She was a little worried about this little guy. After all, this guy had already sighed in his heart that he was going to be beaten up.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-06 16:28:02
Original text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You truest are like the hamster I raised!
Corrected text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You are truly like the hamster I raised!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-06 16:27:58
Original text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You truest are like the hamster I raised!
Corrected text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You are truly like the hamster I raised!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-06 16:27:47
Original text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You truest are like the hamster I raised!
Corrected text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten up but you're still going to go. You really are like the hamster I raised!
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 12:57:38
Original text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go, hey, you are really the same as the hamster I raised!
Corrected text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You truest are like the hamster I raised!
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 12:57:36
Original text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go, hey, you are really the same as the hamster I raised!
Corrected text:
Sigh, you clearly know that you're going to be beaten but still go. You truest are like the hamster I raised!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:31:49
Original text:
Coming to the grove, Rayne told Sherlock to stay away, and Rin also intended to let the Suyu stay away from him.
Corrected text:
Coming to the grove, Rayne told Sherlock to stay away, and Rin also intended to let Suyu stay away from him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 08:41:46
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Rin's chanting had not yet ended. Seeing the white smoke from the muzzle of the gun, to be honest, he would like to hold his head to prevent being hit in the face, but as a villain, he was not allowed to do so.
Corrected text:
Rin's chanting had not yet ended. Seeing the white smoke from the muzzle of the gun, he honestly would have liked to cover his head to prevent being hit in the face, but as a villain, he was not allowed to do so.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:00
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But a strange thing happened. Rin had closed his eyes and prepared to cry, but didn't feel any pain in his body. On the contrary, Rayne let out a shocking howl.
Corrected text:
But a strange thing happened. Rin had closed his eyes and prepared to cry, but didn't feel any pain in his body. On the contrary, Rayne let out a shocked howl.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:11
Original text:
He curiously opened his eyes and found that Rayne covered his cheeks, sitting on the ground, while Sherlock was very worried to support him.
Corrected text:
He curiously opened his eyes and found that Rayne had covered his cheeks, sitting on the ground, while Sherlock was very worried and supported him.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-06-25 23:08:13
Original text:
Even as Rayne covered his face, Rin could see a bruised bag bulging up at a rate visible to the naked eye.
Corrected text:
Even as Rayne covered his face, Rin could see a bruise beginning to bulge up at a rate visible to the naked eye.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 08:41:55
Original text:
Sherlock angrily pointed at Rin, "Fenix, you cheated to use a spatial magic device!"
Corrected text:
Sherlock angrily pointed at Rin, "Fenix, you cheated and used a spatial magic device!"
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-24 08:43:39
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Rin was confused, "Are you trying to frame me? When did I use a spatial magic device? And that thing is so expensive, do you think that you deserve me to use it?"
Corrected text:
Rin was confused, "Are you trying to frame me? When did I use a spatial magic device? And that thing is so expensive, do you think that you’re worthy of me using it?"
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-24 08:43:51
Original text:
"If you didn't use a spatial magic device, why did the bullet that should have hit you land on Rayne's body!"
Corrected text:
"If you didn't use a spatial magic device, then why did the bullet that should have hit you land on Rayne's body!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-04 17:10:04
Original text:
"You idiot, it must be because his alchemy failed and he synthesized a trash weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make false accusations."
Corrected text:
"You idiot, it must be because your alchemy failed and you synthesized a trash weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make false accusations."
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:10
Original text:
"Good guy, it must be because your alchemy failed and you refined a waste weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make a false accusation."
Corrected text:
"You idiot, it must be because his alchemy failed and he synthesized a trash weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make false accusations."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:17
Original text:
"Good guy, it must be because your alchemy failed and refined a waste weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make a false countercharge."
Corrected text:
"Good guy, it must be because your alchemy failed and you refined a waste weapon that would hit its own user. Don't make a false accusation."
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-24 08:45:32
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Wait, not right! The situation before is indeed very strange.
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Wait, that’s not right! The situation before was indeed very strange.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-30 08:44:33
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Losing his face in front of beauty, Rayne dropped the gun on the spot, covering his face and running away, Sherlock rushed to catch up.
Corrected text:
Losing his face in front of a beauty, Rayne dropped the gun on the spot, covering his face and running away, Sherlock rushed to catch up.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:10
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"Sherlock, you're too good."
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"Sherlock, you're too kind."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:26
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"Congratulations, you won it."
Corrected text:
"Congratulations, you won."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:10
Original text:
[Wait, now I know why I felt strange. I remember the Demon King can use space magic! It must be because of her. Hmm, when did Rayne piss her off?]
Corrected text:
[Wait, now I know why I felt something strange. I remember the Demon King can use space magic! It must be because of her. Huh? when did Rayne piss her off?]
Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-24 08:45:43
Original text:
[Wait, I know why did I feel strange. I remember the Demon King can use space magic! It must be because of her. Hmm, when did Rayne piss her off?]
Corrected text:
[Wait, now I know why I felt strange. I remember the Demon King can use space magic! It must be because of her. Hmm, when did Rayne piss her off?]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:31
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She put her hands behind her back and approached Rin. Her previous soft expression disappeared at this time, but putting a weird smile on her face.
Corrected text:
She put her hands behind her back and approached Rin. Her previous soft expression disappeared at this time, but she put a weird smile on her face.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:10
Original text:
"Little guy, did you find something out?"
Corrected text:
"Little guy, did you find out?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:36
Original text:
"Little guy, did you find something?"
Corrected text:
"Little guy, did you find something out?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:11
Original text:
[Crap… did I show too much suspicion, and the demon king is going to kill me?]
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[Crap… did I show too much suspicion, so now the demon king is going to erase me?]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:10
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Rin waved his hand, pretending to be calm: "Found what? Rayne is a waste alchemist?"
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Rin waved his hand, pretending to be calm: "Find out what? That Rayne is a trash alchemist?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:11
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"Then why are you backing up?"
Corrected text:
"Then, why are you backing up?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:47
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At this time, Because of the Demon King's pressure, he instinctively stepped back, until leaning against the tree behind him.
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At this time, because of the Demon King's pressure, he instinctively stepped back, until he leaned against the tree behind him.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:12
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Looking at Suyu who was close at hand, Rin's throat knot rolled up and down.
Corrected text:
Looking at Suyu who was approaching even closer, Rin's adam's apple rolled up and down.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:51:11
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Suyu again came to his ear, "Little guy, I remember you have a betrothed, right? If your betrothed learns what you did before, will she be angry?"
Corrected text:
Suyu again came to his ear, "Little guy, I remember you have a fiancee, right? If your fiancee were to know what you did before, will she be angry?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:51
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Suyu again came to his ear, "Little guy, I remember you have a betrothed, right? If your betrothed knows what you did before, will she be angry?"
Corrected text:
Suyu again came to his ear, "Little guy, I remember you have a betrothed, right? If your betrothed learns what you did before, will she be angry?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:32:58
Original text:
Rin would love to regain his villain's majesty again, but the pressure from Suyu at this time was too much, Rin could even see a vague pair of purple magic wings behind her back.
Corrected text:
Rin would love to regain his villain's majesty, but the pressure from Suyu at this time was too much, Rin could even see a vague pair of purple magic wings behind her back.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 08:28:51
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"Forget it, you are so cute also helped me, I don't mind it."
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"Forget it, you are so cute and you also helped me. I don't mind it."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:33:03
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Feeling a little bit of shame, Suyu subconsciously made a small spell on Rin.
Corrected text:
Feeling a little bit of shame, Suyu subconsciously cast a small spell on Rin.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:33:08
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Then she turned away, walked a few steps, suddenly stopped, and once again reverted to her previous timid look. She put her hand on the chest with fear and anxiety on her face.
Corrected text:
Then she turned away, walked a few steps, suddenly stopped, and once again reverted to her previous timid look. She put her hand on her chest with fear and anxiety on her face.
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-24 08:45:51
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"No matter what you know, please … please don't say anything. No matter what you let me do, I … I will do everything."
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"No matter what you know, please … please don't say anything. No matter what you tell me to do, I … I will do everything."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:33:15
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Rin felt both amused and annoyed. The bitchy Demon King was too much to handle to him.
Corrected text:
Rin felt both amused and annoyed. The bitchy Demon King was too much to handle for him.
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-31 15:20:19
Original text:
Rin felt both funny and annoyed. The bitchy Demon King was too much to handle to him.
Corrected text:
Rin felt both amused and annoyed. The bitchy Demon King was too much to handle to him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:33:22
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Fortunately, in the academy part of the novel, the Demon King had been acting as the behind-the-scenes, and would not appear too often. Otherwise, Rin felt that his heart couldn't stand it.
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Fortunately, in the academy part of the novel, the Demon King had been acting behind the scene, and would not appear too often. Otherwise, Rin felt that his heart wouldn't stand it.
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