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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:51:24
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East Divine Land has a vast territory.
Corrected text:
The land of the Eastern Divine Continent was vast and expansive.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:51:34
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The Sand Region in the South occupies nearly one-tenth of the East Divine Land.
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The southern sand region alone occupied nearly a tenth of the Eastern Divine Continent.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:51:37
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It is said that these land where once filled with birds and flowers everywhere.
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Legend had it that this place was once filled with the sound of birds singing and the fragrance of flowers, with lush green trees providing shade.
Corrected by: DE-JESUS-ELOISA-O. , 2022-12-27 21:15:00
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It is said that there once were birds and flowers everywhere.
Corrected text:
It is said that these land where once filled with birds and flowers everywhere.
Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-09-02 03:37:47
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It is said that there were birds and flowers.
Corrected text:
It is said that there once were birds and flowers everywhere.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:51:53
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But about 3000 years ago, an unknown immortal fell here. He was seriously injured and wanted to recuperate here. But the poison in his body made him fall into madness.
Corrected text:
But around three thousand years ago, an unknown immortal fell here. He was severely injured and intended to recuperate here. However, his condition worsened, and he became engulfed in madness due to the onset of a potent poison.
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:20:57
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But about 3000 years ago, an unknown immortal fell here. He was seriously injured and wanted to recuperate here. But the poison in his body made him fell into madness.
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But about 3000 years ago, an unknown immortal fell here. He was seriously injured and wanted to recuperate here. But the poison in his body made him fall into madness.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-06 10:57:04
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He knocked down the highest mountain in the Sand Region and drained the clearest River in the Sand Region!
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He knocked down the highest mountain and drained its clearest River.
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Corrected by: DE-JESUS-ELOISA-O. , 2022-12-27 21:15:03
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He slapped his mouth, and the after flow annihilated a city; he cut off his [Immortal base] with a sword, then the immortal power spurted out caused a storm that lasted for several months.
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He hurt himself , and the blood flow that look like it could annihilated a city; he cut off his [Immortal base] with a sword, then the immortal power that burst out caused a storm that lasted for several months.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:52:02
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The land of East Divine Land that is dyed with the blood of the immortal!
Corrected text:
The land of the Eastern Divine Continent was stained with the blood of the immortal!
Corrected by: DE-JESUS-ELOISA-O. , 2022-12-27 21:15:06
Original text:
Dye the land of East Divine Land with the blood of the immortal!
Corrected text:
The land of East Divine Land that is dyed with the blood of the immortal!
Corrected by: DE-JESUS-ELOISA-O. , 2022-12-27 21:15:05
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Dye the land of East Divine Land with the blood of the immortal!
Corrected text:
The land of East Divine Land that is dyed with the blood of the immortal!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:52:21
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Every year, countless people who believe in legends come to the East Divine Land to search for treasure. Even if they can't find the relics of immortals, it's a great thing to find those ancient religious relics covered in sand.
Corrected text:
Every year, countless people who believed in the legend came to the Eastern Divine Continent to seek treasure. Even if they couldn't find any immortal relics, finding ancient sects ruins buried under the sand was still a great thing.
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:21:00
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Every year, countless people who believe in legends come to the East Divine Land to search for treasure. Even if they can't find the relics of immortals, it's a great good thing to find those ancient religious relics covered in sand.
Corrected text:
Every year, countless people who believe in legends come to the East Divine Land to search for treasure. Even if they can't find the relics of immortals, it's a great thing to find those ancient religious relics covered in sand.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:18
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Year after year, Sand Region has gradually become a synonym for chaos. Many powerful sects have chosen Sand Region as a place for their disciples to train.
Corrected text:
Year after year, the sand region gradually became synonymous with chaos, and many powerful sects deliberately chose the sand region as a place to train their disciples.
Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-10 06:09:56
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Year after year, Sand Region has gradually become a synonym for chaos. Many powerful sects have chosen Sand Region as a place for their disciples to try out.
Corrected text:
Year after year, Sand Region has gradually become a synonym for chaos. Many powerful sects have chosen Sand Region as a place for their disciples to train.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:21
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Bai Lian knows that this legend is true.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian, who was familiar with the game plot, knew that this legend was true.
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Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:21:03
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This is not just because the third younger Martial Sister, who was born again, picked up the immortal weapon [Ten Thousand Poison Pearl] that was on the verge of collapse.
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This is not just because the third younger Martial Sister, who was reincarnated, picked up the immortal weapon [Ten Thousand Poison Pearl] that was on the verge of collapse.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:23
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For example, the third Martial Sister is actually a reborn person.
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For example, the third martial sister was actually a reincarnator.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:27
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For example, the third Martial Sister didn't stay in the Duxian sect before her rebirth, and she had a very unhappy life.
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Before her reincarnation, the third martial sister had not been with the Duxian Sect and had a very unhappy life.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:30
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For example, Bai Lian in the third Martial Sister's previous life was a famous bitch, which is one of the reasons why she resisted joining the Duxian sect.
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Before her transmigration, the previous timeline Bai Lian was a scheming woman and a bad person, which was also one of the reasons why she resisted joining the Duxian Sect.
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:21:08
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For example, Bai Lian in the third Martial SIster's previous life was a famous bitch, which is one of the reasons why she resisted joining the Duxian sect.
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For example, Bai Lian in the third Martial Sister's previous life was a famous bitch, which is one of the reasons why she resisted joining the Duxian sect.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:36
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For another example, after the third younger Martial Sister repaired the Ten Thousand Poison Pearl, she obtained a very rare evil spirit blood.
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Moreover, after repairing the Ten Thousand Poison Pearl, the third martial sister obtained a very rare bloodline of a demonic god.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:46
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The reason why the third Martial Sister was not called an evil god, but an evil Shura was probably because she killed too many people!
Corrected text:
The reason why the third senior sister wasn't called the "Heaven-Defying Demonic God" but the "Heaven-Defying Asura" was probably because she killed too many people!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:51
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Bai Lian thought so.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian thought to herself.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:29
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Um.
Corrected text:
Hmm.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:32
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There should be no other reason.
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There shouldn't be any other reasons.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:38
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At the thought that she would bring such a terrible third Martial Sister back to the Duxian sect, and make her live in harmony with the second Martial Sister…
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To bring back this terrifying third senior sister to the Duxian Sect and have her coexist peacefully with the second senior sister...
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:48
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Life is not easy.
Corrected text:
Life wasn't easy.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:46
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She took out the map given to her by Master An Lan. In short, she should first determine the specific location of the third younger Martial Sister and think about countermeasures.
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She took out the map that her master, An Lan, had given her. For now, she needed to locate the third martial sister's exact location before considering a plan of action.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:50:56
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It's exciting to think about it.
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Bai Lian felt quite excited at the thought.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:50
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For the second Martial Sister, Bai Lian hopes that she can regain her courage, just like the Holy Spirit Goddess in the game.
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For the second martial sister, Bai Lian hoped that she could regain her courage and become the resilient Holy Spirit Goddess like in the game, occasionally playing the role of a righteous ally.
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-02 01:41:42
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For the second Martial Sister, Bai Lian hopes that she can regain her courage., just like the Holy Spirit Godness in the game.
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For the second Martial Sister, Bai Lian hopes that she can regain her courage, just like the Holy Spirit Goddess in the game.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:54
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Bai Lian hopes that after revenge, she can cultivate her moral integrity, arrange flowers, and plant grass.
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Bai Lian hoped that after revenge, she could cultivate her character and enjoy her leisure time planting flowers and grass, wouldn't that be beautiful?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 10:59:57
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"Haw!"
Corrected text:
"Squeak!"
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-18 22:10:10
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The jade rabbit lay back and fell into the sand with its feet facing the sky. Its two long green and white ears fanned like a fan.
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The jade rabbit lay back and fell into the sand with its feet facing the sky. Its two long blue and white ears fanned like a fan.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-06 16:27:51
Original text:
[Heat]
Corrected text:
[Hot]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:52:50
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Patter.
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Snap.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:11
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Her right hand swayed slightly, and suddenly a dozen ice butterflies appeared out of thin air. They flew slowly around the jade rabbit, and a mobile air-conditioned room was born.
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She lightly shook her right hand, and suddenly more than a dozen ice butterflies appeared out of nowhere. They slowly flew around the jade rabbit, and a mobile air-conditioned room was created just like that.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:00
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The rabbit was so moved that its hard ears softened.
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The rabbit's ears, which had stiffened with emotion, had now softened.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:07
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In front of her is where An Lan found the third Martial Sister, Gray Wind Town.
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Ahead was the place where An Lan had discovered the third martial sister, Gray Wind Town.
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:21:12
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The front is where An Lan found the third Martial Sister, Gray Wind Town.
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In front of her is where An Lan found the third Martial Sister, Gray Wind Town.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:14
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However, the liveliness of this town is no less than that of the elegant ancient cities in the coastal area of East Divine Land.
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But the liveliness of this small town was no less than the elegant and ancient cities with their pavilions and towers along the Eastern Divine Continent's coast.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:19
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As soon as she crossed the dilapidated town gate, the cries of vendors came from both sides of the spacious street.
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As soon as Bai Lian crossed the dilapidated town gate, she heard the cries of the vendors on both sides of the wide street.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:19
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"Have a look, have a look. The shell of the cotton tree!!"
Corrected text:
"Take a look, take a look, the fluffy tree bark, with its built-in warming effect, a must-have for home travel to dispel loneliness, can't be taken advantage of or deceived!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:14
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"Haw!"
Corrected text:
"Squeek!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:22
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The jade rabbit looked at the white tree shell like thing with a puzzled look.
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The jade rabbit looked at the white fluffy tree bark that looked like a cylinder with a puzzled expression.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:25
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"It's not for food, it's for use."
Corrected text:
"That's not for eating, it's for use."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:27
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"Haw?"
Corrected text:
"Squeek?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-20 08:53:32
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The little rabbit was confused. Is it a pot for boiling water?
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The inexperienced rabbit was confused. Was it a kettle for boiling water?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:30
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Bai Lian doesn't want to explain. It's just a female rabbit. Even if it knows what the thing is for, it's useless.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian didn't plan to explain. Even if the female rabbit knew what it was for, it wouldn't matter.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:33
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As Bai Lian was walking towards the residence of the third Martial Sister, a quarrel suddenly came from the roadside stall.
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As Bai Lian walked towards the third martial sister's residence, a quarrel suddenly erupted at a roadside stall.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:36
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She saw a woman with gorgeous clothes and a cool face angrily walk toward the stall owner who sells the shell of the cotton tree.
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A gorgeously dressed, cold-faced woman walked up to the vendor selling fluffy tree bark.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:42
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"You, you shameless, dare to sell such things in broad daylight!"
Corrected text:
"You, shameless! How dare you sell this kind of thing in broad daylight!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:51
Original text:
The stall owner was immediately unhappy, "Miss, I don't steal or rob. It doesn't violate Gray Wind Town's regulations. Why can't I sell this?"
Corrected text:
The vendor became unhappy: "Miss, I'm not stealing or robbing, and I'm not violating any rules in Gray Wind Town. Why can't I sell this?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:00:57
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The woman's face blushed. She scolded, "Obscene!"
Corrected text:
The woman's face turned red, and she scolded: "You're vulgar!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:03
Original text:
"I want to be high-class. I don't have the chance." The stall owner muttered.
Corrected text:
"I'd like to be upper-class too, but I don't have the chance." The vendor muttered.
Corrected by: Toffi-coffe , 2023-01-06 06:08:53
Original text:
"I want to be high-class. I don't have this chance." The stall owner muttered.
Corrected text:
"I want to be high-class. I don't have the chance." The stall owner muttered.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:07
Original text:
The woman pulled out her sword. At this time, her Martial Sister ran from a distance and hurriedly stopped her.
Corrected text:
The woman drew her sword with a "clang". At this moment, her martial sister ran over from afar and stopped her anxiously.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:10
Original text:
Seeing that the conflict is about to intensify, Bai Lian saw three options in front of her.
Corrected text:
Seeing the conflict about to escalate, three options appeared before Bai Lian's eyes:
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:26
Original text:
[Task 1: Come forward to help the girl (Reward: a medium-grade magic tool: Lethal Chain Sabre)]
Corrected text:
【Task 1: Assist the woman (reward: a medium-grade magic weapon)】
Corrected by: BoredMonster , 2022-09-21 08:39:48
Original text:
[Task 1: come forward to help the girl (Reward: a medium-grade magic tool: Lethal Chain Sabre)]
Corrected text:
[Task 1: Come forward to help the girl (Reward: a medium-grade magic tool: Lethal Chain Sabre)]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:30
Original text:
[Task 2: Spend money to buy all the tree shells (Reward: Qi Gathering method)]
Corrected text:
[Task 2: Spend money to buy all the tree shells (Reward: Qi Gathering Technique)]
Corrected by: BoredMonster , 2022-09-21 08:39:50
Original text:
[Task 2: spend money to buy all the tree shells (Reward: Qi Gathering method)]
Corrected text:
[Task 2: Spend money to buy all the tree shells (Reward: Qi Gathering method)]
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Corrected by: BoredMonster , 2022-09-21 08:39:51
Original text:
[Task 3: none of my business! (Reward: Painting +1)]
Corrected text:
[Task 3: None of my business! (Reward: Painting +1)]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:36
Original text:
In order not to attract the attention of those evil men who are born to flirt with women in the game, Bai Lian specially used magic to change her appearance and wore a veil.
Corrected text:
In order to avoid attracting the attention of those evil people in the game who exist solely to harass women, Bai Lian deliberately used magic to change her appearance and wore a veil to cover her face.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:01:39
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She doesn't want to get into trouble at this time.
Corrected text:
She didn't want to cause trouble at this time.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:02:37
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Bai Lian is determined to stay away from the trouble center.
Corrected text:
The villains in this game are very typical of xianxia novels. There are small fish and big fish, and there are even more powerful figures behind them. After she worked hard to defeat them, third martial sister might have already run off somewhere.Bailian wisely stayed away from trouble.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:02:40
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"How nice!"
Corrected text:
"Great!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:03:10
Original text:
It is full of white-haired girls!
Corrected text:
No other reason but the abundance of white-haired people!
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-02 14:21:15
Original text:
There are full of white-haired girls!
Corrected text:
It is full of white-haired girls!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 11:03:14
Original text:
Half the people she saw along the way had white hair.
Corrected text:
Half of the people she saw on the way were white-haired.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 19:13:24
Original text:
At the thought that the third Martial Sister also had white hair, her slightly heavy heart relaxed.
Corrected text:
Thinking that third martial sister also had white hair, her slightly heavy heart relaxed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 19:14:59
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Half an hour later, Bai Lian came to the gate of a big house.
Corrected text:
Half an hour later, Bai Lian arrived at the gate of a large mansion.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 19:15:05
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According to Bai Lian, the Su family is a small-scale cultivation family, and the strongest person in the family is only on the Foundation Establishment Stage.
Corrected text:
As far as she knew, the Su family was a small-scale cultivation clan, and the strongest person in the clan was only at the Foundation Establishment stage.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-22 19:15:03
Original text:
Su Youwei.
Corrected text:
Her full name was Su Youwei.
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