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Edited by: AbyssParagon, joafh, Sang-N, anonymous, SoaringJe, the-Hellhound, xx-xx, Alter-Sky
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:03:38
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The Duxian sect has five main peaks, of which the highest is the Yunluo peak where the sect leader resides.
Corrected text:
The Duxian Sect has five main peaks, of which the highest is the Yunluo Peak where the sect leader resides.
Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-06-30 19:27:16
Original text:
The Duxian sect has five main peaks, of which the highest is the Yunluo peak where the sect leader lives.
Corrected text:
The Duxian sect has five main peaks, of which the highest is the Yunluo peak where the sect leader resides.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:04:07
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The Yunluo green mountain, located in the northwest corner of the Duxian sect, is often covered with clouds, obscuring it from sight.
Corrected text:
The Green Yunluo Mountain, located in the northwest corner of the Duxian Sect, is often covered with clouds, obscuring it from sight.
Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:26:40
Original text:
The Yunluo green mountain, located in the northwest corner of the Duxian sect, is often hidden by clouds.
Corrected text:
The Yunluo green mountain, located in the northwest corner of the Duxian sect, is often covered with clouds, making it not visible to the public.
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Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:26:44
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There are big rocks on the mountain, in the shape of beasts or ghosts.
Corrected text:
Big rocks lay upon the mountain, shaped like numerous beasts and ghosts.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:06:30
Original text:
Currently, atop a big stone enveloped by the tinkling sound of a stream, lay on his side a white-haired old man under a green pine tree; He was leisurely watching Spirit Fish swimming in the pool.
Corrected text:
Currently, atop a big stone enveloped by the tinkling sound of a stream, a white-haired old man lays on his side under a green pine tree; he was leisurely watching Spirit Fishes swimming in the pool.
Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:26:47
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At this time.
Corrected text:
At this time,
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:10:16
Original text:
This person was Jue Yunzi, the sect leader of the Duxian sect, whose real name was Lu Yuansi.
Corrected text:
This person was Jue Yunzi, the sect leader of the Duxian Sect, whose real name was Lu Yuansi.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-12 08:23:18
Original text:
atop a big stone surrounded with the tinkling sounds of a stream,
Corrected text:
Atop a big stone surrounded by the tinkling sounds of a stream,
Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:26:54
Original text:
On the big stone, with the tinkling sounds of the stream.
Corrected text:
atop a big stone surrounded with the tinkling sounds of a stream,
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:10:32
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Suddenly, a middle-aged man in a loose white Taoist robe appeared in front of Jue Yunzi. His tone was somewhat dignified, "Sect leader, big news!"
Corrected text:
Suddenly, a middle-aged man in a loose white taoist robe appeared in front of Jue Yunzi. His tone was somewhat dignified, "Sect leader, big news!"
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:39:11
Original text:
a white-haired old man lay on his side under a green pine tree and was leisurely watching spirit fish playing in the pool.
Corrected text:
a white-haired old man lay on his side under a green pine tree and was leisurely watching spirit fish playing in the pool.
Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:27:01
Original text:
A white-haired old man lay on his side under the green pine tree and was leisurely watching the spirit fish playing in the pool.
Corrected text:
a white-haired old man lay on his side under a green pine tree and was leisurely watching spirit fish playing in the pool.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-06-30 19:24:00
Original text:
This person was Jue Yunzi, then sect leader of the Duxian sect, whose real name was Lu Yuansi.
Corrected text:
This person was Jue Yunzi, the sect leader of the Duxian sect, whose real name was Lu Yuansi.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-01 09:46:15
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Suddenly, a middle-aged man in a loose white Taoist robe fell across from Jue Yunzi. His tone was somewhat dignified, "Sect leader, big deal!"
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Suddenly, a middle-aged man in a loose white Taoist robe fell across from Jue Yunzi. His tone was somewhat dignified, "Sect leader, big news!"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:10:53
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The person who swayed in the center of the "screen" was Bai Lian, who had just come out of the Medical Pills Pavilion and was rushing back to the Qiongming peak to repair the Obsolete Spiritual Root for Xiao Jinse.
Corrected text:
The person who swayed in the center of the "screen" was Bai Lian, who had just come out of the Medical Pills Pavilion and was rushing back to the Qiongming Peak to repair the Obsolete Spiritual Root for Xiao Jinse.
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:39:50
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Then, the mist in the pool formed a "Screen" in front of Jue Yunzi.
Corrected text:
Then, the mist in the pool formed a "screen" in front of Jue Yunzi.
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:40:10
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The person who swayed in the center of the "Screen" was Bai Lian, who had just come out of the Medical Pills Pavilion and was eager to go back to the Qiongming peak to repair the Obsolete Spiritual Root for Xiao Jinse.
Corrected text:
The person who swayed in the center of the "screen" was Bai Lian, who had just come out of the Medical Pills Pavilion and was eager to go back to the Qiongming peak to repair the Obsolete Spiritual Root for Xiao Jinse.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:11:11
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As a sect leader of the Duxian sect, he has cultivated a calm heart for more than 500 years.
Corrected text:
As a sect leader of the Duxian Sect, he has cultivated a calm heart for more than 500 years.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:11:26
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However, since the late master's favorite younger Martial Sister, An Lan, accepted a disciple named Bai Lian, Jue Yunzi found that his heart was becoming more and more unstable.
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However, since the late master's favorite Younger Martial Sister, An Lan, accepted a disciple named Bai Lian, Jue Yunzi found that his heart was becoming more and more unstable.
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Corrected by: joafh , 2022-06-30 19:27:06
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It has formed a Tao Halo after just awakening. Then, what will it be after she grows up?
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She has already formed a Tao Halo after just awakening. What will it be like after she grows up?
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:12:31
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Jue Yunzi shook his head and said, "It is too complicated. It is as bright as a star river and as deep as an abyss. It is a mountain from a distance, yet water from a…"
Corrected text:
Jue Yunzi shook his head and said, "It is too complicated. It is as bright as a star river and as deep as an abyss. It is a mountain from a distance, yet water from…"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-11 00:05:02
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Jue Yunzi shook his head and said, "It's so complicated. It's as bright as a star river and as deep as an abyss. It's a mountain from a distance, yet a water from a…"
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Jue Yunzi shook his head and said, "It is too complicated. It is as bright as a star river and as deep as an abyss. It is a mountain from a distance, yet water from a…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-06 10:57:36
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Jue Yunzi coughed softly, stroked his cheeks, and then stood with his clasped in front of him. "Tao Halos contain profound knowledge passed down from ancient times. How can I understand it at a glance?"
Corrected text:
Jue Yunzi coughed softly, stroked his cheeks, and then stood with his clasped hands in front of him. "Tao Halos contain profound knowledge passed down from ancient times. How can I understand it at a glance?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-11 00:05:04
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Jueyunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him. "Know, there is no end to learning!"
Corrected text:
Jueyunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him. "Know this, there is no end to learning!"
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:41:29
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Jue Yunzi coughed softly, pulled his face and stood with his hands down, "Tao Halo is passed down from the ancient times. How can I understand it at a glance?"
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Jue Yunzi coughed softly, pulled his face and stood with his hands down. "Tao Halo is passed down from the ancient times. How can I understand it at a glance?"
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-27 09:51:26
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Jueyunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him. "Learn, there is no end to learning!"
Corrected text:
Jue Yunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him. "Learn, there is no end to learning!"
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:41:43
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Jueyunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him, "Learn, there is no end to learning!"
Corrected text:
Jueyunzi reached out and patted Gaoyi on the shoulder, as if to comfort him. "Learn, there is no end to learning!"
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:41:55
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"……”
Corrected text:
"……"
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:42:15
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Jue Yunzi took out a thing, "Then use this thing to hide it."
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Jue Yunzi took out a thing. "Then use this thing to hide it."
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Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-06-30 19:27:20
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When Gaoyi turned around and left, he still heard Jue Yunzi saying, "We are lucky, once in a million years, the light of the sect…"
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When Gaoyi turned around and left, he still heard Jue Yunzi saying, "We are lucky, once in a million years, the future of the sect…"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:13:51
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In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The shame of the sect", "The scum of the world", and "The lawless madwoman", opened the gate.
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In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The Shame of the Sect", "The Scum of the World", and "The Lawless Madwoman", opened the gate.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:14:04
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"Bai Lian… Elder martial sister!"
Corrected text:
"Bai Lian… elder martial sister!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:41:48
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In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The shame of the sect", "The scum of the world", and "The madwomen outside the law", opened the gate.
Corrected text:
In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The shame of the sect", "The scum of the world", and "The madwoman outside the law", opened the gate.
Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-06-30 19:27:27
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In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The shame of the sect", "The scum of the world", and "The madman outside the law", opened the gate.
Corrected text:
In the game, Bai Lian, who was called "The shame of the sect", "The scum of the world", and "The madwomen outside the law", opened the gate.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:14:18
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Her clothes had long been changed into the uniform of the Qiongming peak disciple——
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Her clothes had long been changed into the uniform of the Qiongming Peak disciple——
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:16:35
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This was designed by Bai Lian and placed next to Xiao Jinse's pillow. It is embedded with a delicate lotus flower. After wearing this dress, she formally became her second Martial Sister.
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This was designed by Bai Lian and placed next to Xiao Jinse's pillow. It is embedded with a delicate lotus flower. After wearing this dress, she formally became her Second Martial Sister.
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Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-06-30 19:27:31
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Xiao Jinse replied, "Very sweet."
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Xiao Jinse replied, "Very well."
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Corrected by: xx-xx , 2022-11-06 08:48:00
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In this fairy mountain, even if you open the door, you can feel carefree.
Corrected text:
In this immortal mountain, even if you open the door, you can feel carefree.
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The Qiongming peak is really quiet. She used to have trouble sleeping because of the early morning bird chirping, so she created a scarecrow that can automatically chase and drive away birds and animals.
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The Qiongming Peak is really quiet. She used to have trouble sleeping because of the early morning bird chirping, so she created a scarecrow that can automatically chase and drive away birds and animals.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-01 09:46:08
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The Qiongming peak is really quiet. She used to be sleepy and suffered from the early morning bird chirping. So she created a scarecrow that can automatic boxing to drive away birds and animals.
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The Qiongming peak is really quiet. She used to be sleepy and suffered from the early morning bird chirping. So she created a scarecrow that can automatically fight to drive away birds and animals.
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Unfortunately, this trick didn't work on the rabbit. Instead of scaring it away, the rabbit continued attacking Bai Lian's scarecrow times.
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Unfortunately, this trick didn't work on the rabbit. Instead of scaring it away, the rabbit continued attacking Bai Lian's scarecrow at times.
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:43:10
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"In that case, let me help you repair the Spiritual Root now."
Corrected text:
"In that case, let me help you repair your Spiritual Root now."
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:43:47
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This light sentence fell on Xiao Jinse's ears like thunder. She unconsciously stepped back and still felt that all this was like a dream, "Senior sister…"
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This light sentence fell on Xiao Jinse's ears like thunder. She unconsciously stepped back and still felt that all this was like a dream. "Senior sister…"
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"Relax." Bai Lian took out a jade bottle from the medicine chest, and led Xiao Jinse into the room, "Take this medical pill first, and I will help you refine the energy inside it."
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"Relax." Bai Lian took out a jade bottle from the medicine chest and led Xiao Jinse into the room. "Take this medical pill first, and I will help you refine the energy inside it."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-03 08:43:23
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A hot wind rose in her ear, and a voice came, "Younger martial sister, remember, this is Dantian. The breath will be in Dantian. The middle of Dantian is the door of Yin and Yang!"
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A hot wind rose in her ear, and a voice came, "Younger martial sister, remember, this is your Dantian. The breath will be in the Dantian. The middle of Dantian is the door of Yin and Yang!"
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:44:35
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Her head was dizzy and it was a little painful.
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Her head was dizzy, and it was a little painful.
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:44:32
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Her head was dizzy and it was a little painful.
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Her head was dizzy, and it was a little painful.
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:44:55
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Then Bai Lian said, "I will help you guide the medicine energy, reshape the Spiritual Root, and help you condense the cyclone. It will be a little painful at first, but as long as you bear it, you can officially enter the world of cultivation!"
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Then Bai Lian said, "I will help you guide the medicine energy, reshape the Spiritual Root, and help you condense the cyclone. It will be a little painful at first, but as long as you bear it, you can officially enter the world of cultivation!
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:44:55
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Then Bai Lian said, "I will help you guide the medicine energy, reshape the Spiritual Root, and help you condense the cyclone. It will be a little painful at first, but as long as you bear it, you can officially enter the world of cultivation!"
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Then Bai Lian said, "I will help you guide the medicine energy, reshape the Spiritual Root, and help you condense the cyclone. It will be a little painful at first, but as long as you bear it, you can officially enter the world of cultivation!
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:45:16
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[Task 1: sit and watch Xiao Jinse fail to refine the medicine energy (Reward: Tianxiang Jade Dew)]
Corrected text:
[Task 1: Sit and watch Xiao Jinse fail to refine the medicine energy (Reward: Tianxiang Jade Dew)]
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:45:29
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[Task 2: take the initiative to eliminate Xiao Jinse's pain (Reward: a top-grade magic tool - Red Dragon Armour)]
Corrected text:
[Task 2: Take the initiative to eliminate Xiao Jinse's pain (Reward: a top-grade magic tool - Red Dragon Armour)]
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:45:28
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[Task 2: take the initiative to eliminate Xiao Jinse's pain (Reward: a top-grade magic tool - Red Dragon Armour)]
Corrected text:
[Task 2: Take the initiative to eliminate Xiao Jinse's pain (Reward: a top-grade magic tool - Red Dragon Armour)]
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:45:46
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[Task 3: treat it as if nothing happened (Reward: Alchemy +2)]
Corrected text:
[Task 3: Treat it as if nothing happened (Reward: Alchemy +2)]
Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:45:45
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[Task 3: treat it as if nothing happened (Reward: Alchemy +2)]
Corrected text:
[Task 3: Treat it as if nothing happened (Reward: Alchemy +2)]
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:46:47
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But just then, Xiao Jinse's eyes parted, her teeth loosened slightly, and a "Cry" came out of her mouth.
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But just then, Xiao Jinse's eyes parted, her teeth loosened slightly, and a "cry" came out of her mouth.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:19:42
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She also pressed down Xiao Jinse's restless legs. Although her posture was somewhat indecent, the effect was fairly good.
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She also pressed down on Xiao Jinse's restless legs. Although her posture was somewhat indecent, the effect was fairly good.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:32:59
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Xiao Jinse didn’t know how long she had slept.
Corrected text:
Xiao Jinse didn’t know how long she slept.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:02
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When she woke up, she saw the wooden ceiling.
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When she woke up, she saw a wooden ceiling.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:04
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Cyclone!
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A cyclone!
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:07
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Fixed, really fixed.
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It was fixed, really fixed.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:11
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It's too complicated.
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It was too complicated.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:15
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Pictures floated before her eyes, and the last frame in front of her were Bai Lian's flushed cheeks.
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Pictures floated before her eyes, and the last image in front of her was Bai Lian's flushed cheeks.
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Corrected by: SoaringJe , 2022-10-01 07:48:04
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Xiao Jinse choked, she was speechless.
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Xiao Jinse choked; she was speechless.
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Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:18
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At this time, Xiao Jinse suddenly found that her arm was grasped. She saw Bai Lian slowly open her eyes.
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As they sat there, Xiao Jinse suddenly found that her arm was grasped. She saw Bai Lian slowly open her eyes.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 08:21:02
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"Senior Martial Sister!", Xiao Jinse exclaimed.
Corrected text:
"Senior martial sister!", Xiao Jinse exclaimed.
Corrected by: AbyssParagon , 2022-07-02 21:33:22
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"Well, it deserves my efforts."
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"Well, it deserved my efforts."
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