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Edited by: Jito-Mitsuhide, anonymous, MoonSerenity, Sang-N, Glariosa, arc3, AesZy, Taabraiz-Akhtar, Reika-V, Itza-TommyGun, Alter-Sky, Thomas-Brockmeier
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:55:52
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Dong.
Corrected text:
Dong!
Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:33
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Dang.
Corrected text:
Dong.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:55:54
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Dong.
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Dong!
Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:36
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Dang.
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Dong.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:55:56
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Dong.
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Dong!
Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:38
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Dang.
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Dong.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 09:59:38
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In the East Divine Land, melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected text:
In the East Divine Land, melodious bells rang throughout the mountains.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-06 10:57:34
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In the East Divine Land, the melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected text:
In the East Divine Land, melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:02
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East Divine Land, the melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected text:
In the East Divine Land, the melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:47:22
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East Divine Land, the melodious bells rang through the mountains.
Corrected text:
In the East Divine Land, the melodious bells rang through the mountains.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 12:53:47
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The triennial Immortality Promotion Meeting was held again, and countless men, women, and children with the dream of immortal embarked on the road of seeking immortality.
Corrected text:
The triennial Immortality Promotion Meeting was held again, and countless men, women, and children who dreamed of becoming immortals embarked on the road of seeking immortality.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:06
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Bai Lian flew from the Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices below her —
Corrected text:
Bai Lian flew from the Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices heard below her —
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-09 14:28:45
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Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices under her feet——
Corrected text:
Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices beneath her feet——
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-09 14:28:15
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Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices under her feet——
Corrected text:
Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after having received her master's order. At this time, noisy voices could be heard underneath her feet——
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 12:54:25
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Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after receiving the master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices under her feet——
Corrected text:
Bai Lian flew to Qiongming peak after receiving her master's order. At this time, there were noisy voices under her feet——
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:09
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"Younger martial sister, the immortal road is bitter and cold. We might as well hug each other for warmth."
Corrected text:
"Younger martial sister, the immortal road is cold and bitter. We might as well hug each other for warmth."
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 09:59:46
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"My son Huang Teng has the talent to be an Immortal Emperor. This time, he will definitely be liked by the immortal!"
Corrected text:
"My son, Huang Teng has the talent to be an Immortal Emperor. This time, he will definitely be liked by the immortal!"
Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:12
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"My son Huang Teng has the talent to be an Immortal Emperor. This time, he will be liked by the immortal!"
Corrected text:
"My son Huang Teng has the talent to be an Immortal Emperor. This time, he will definitely be liked by the immortal!"
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:28
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"There are 80,000 words in the world, but the word 'love' is the most murderous. If I enter the immortal gate today, I will cut off my relationship with the mortal world and practice the way of forgetting love."
Corrected text:
"There are 80,000 words in the world, but the word 'love' is the most murderous. If I enter the immortal gate today, I will cut off my relationship with the mortal world and practice the way of celibacy."
Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-08-02 08:32:00
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"There are 80000 words in the world, but the word 'love' is the most murderous. If I enter the immortal gate today, I will cut off my relationship with the mortal world and practice the way of forgetting love."
Corrected text:
"There are 80,000 words in the world, but the word 'love' is the most murderous. If I enter the immortal gate today, I will cut off my relationship with the mortal world and practice the way of forgetting love."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-11 22:57:25
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Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not mistaken.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered were not mistaken.
Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 09:59:43
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Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not mistaken.
Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 09:59:40
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Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not mistaken.
Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:23:40
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Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved her memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:23:33
Original text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved her memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved the memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:31
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Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy, which once again proved that the memory of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
Corrected text:
Listening to these familiar lines, Bai Lian felt that she was about to go crazy. Which once again proved her memories of her previous life that she had just recovered was not wrong.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:34
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"This is not a normal world!"
Corrected text:
"This is not the world I know!"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 12:56:03
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Bai Lian's lips turn pale.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian's lips turned pale.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-31 14:39:15
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In her previous life, she was just an ordinary otaku girl. She loved reading novels and playing games. She had just graduated from university and had not experienced the hardness of working nor the temptation of the world.
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In her previous life, she was just an ordinary otaku girl. She loved reading novels and playing games. She had just graduated from university and had not experienced the hardship of working nor the temptation of the world.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 12:57:04
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This is Bai Lian. After staying up all night playing games and deciding to buy some food, she was hit by a speeding truck in front of a fruit stall.
Corrected text:
That was Bai Lian. After staying up all night playing games and deciding to buy some food, she was hit by a speeding truck in front of a fruit stall.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:38
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Bai Lian was confused.
Corrected text:
She was confused.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:36
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Because she has transmigrated into another world.
Corrected text:
Because it seemed that she had transmigrated into another world.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:40
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She transmigrated into another world.
Corrected text:
Because she has transmigrated into another world.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-16 18:33:19
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Without cheat!
Corrected text:
Without cheats!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-25 17:13:07
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Without parents!
Corrected text:
Without cheat!
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 09:59:58
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A "young girl" wearing a white cloud pattern robe with elegant eyebrows and eyes. She had a gentle look as bright as spring and walked leisurely along the street.
Corrected text:
As Bai Lian was deep in thought, a "young girl" wearing a white cloud pattern robe with elegant eyebrows and eyes, with a gentle look as bright as spring walked leisurely along the street.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:01:31
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A "Young girl" wearing a white cloud pattern robe with elegant eyebrows and eyes, a lazy look as bright as spring walked leisurely in the street.
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A "Young girl" wearing a white cloud pattern robe with elegant eyebrows and eyes. She had a lazy look as bright as spring and walked leisurely along the street.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:17:50
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She had never seen a person's face marked with so many words saying "Death" before, she was quite literally the goddess of death!
Corrected text:
The "young girl" had never seen a person's face marked with so many words of "Death" before. She was quite literally the goddess of death!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-11 22:57:35
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She had never seen a person marked with as much "death" as on her face!
Corrected text:
She had never seen a person's face marked with so many words saying "Death" before, she was quite literally the goddess of death!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-11 22:57:32
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She had never seen a person marked with as much "death" as on her face!
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She had never seen a person's face marked with so many words saying "Death" before, she was quite literally the goddess of death!
Corrected by: arc3 , 2022-09-02 14:21:53
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She had never seen a person with as much "death" as on her face!
Corrected text:
She had never seen a person marked with as much "death" as on her face!
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:27:22
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After whispering that, the girl raised her head and said with a smile, "I am An Lan, the martial master of the Qiongming peak of the Duxian sect. Would you like to be my first disciple and practice the art of immortality with me?"
Corrected text:
After whispering that, the girl raised her head and said with a smile, "I am An Lan, the martial master of the Qiongming Peak of the Duxian Sect. Would you like to be my first disciple and practice the art of immortality with me?"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:28:06
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Bai Lian, who thought that this was her "Golden finger", bowed down.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian, who thought that this was her "golden finger", bowed down.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-31 13:14:54
Original text:
Bai Lianna, who thought that this was her "Golden finger", bowed down.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian, who thought that this was her "Golden finger", bowed down.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:28:44
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After that, Bai Lian also asked An Lan why she was accepted. After all, An Lan was famous for her laziness among the entire Duxian sect. The fact that she had now taken a disciple had even shocked the sect leader.
Corrected text:
After that, Bai Lian also asked An Lan why she was accepted. After all, An Lan was famous for her laziness among the entire Duxian Sect. The fact that she had now taken a disciple had even shocked the sect leader.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:44
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After that, Bai Lian also asked An Lan why she had accepted. After all, An Lan was famous for her laziness in the entire Duxian sect. The fact that she had now taken a disciple had even shocked the sect leader.
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After that, Bai Lian also asked An Lan why she was accepted. After all, An Lan was famous for her laziness in the entire Duxian sect. The fact that she had now taken a disciple had even shocked the sect leader nearby.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-04 21:36:20
Original text:
An Lan, "Haha."
Corrected text:
An Lan, "Hahaha."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-20 08:58:59
Original text:
An Lan, "Lol."
Corrected text:
An Lan, "Haha."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-09 14:28:19
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In the face of Bai Lian's questions, An Lan didn't answer in detail.
Corrected text:
Faced with Bai Lian's questions, An Lan answered while omitting detail.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:47
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In the face of Bai Lian's questions, An Lan didn't answer her every time.
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In the face of Bai Lian's questions, An Lan didn't answer in detail.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:55
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This is her aura as the protagonist!!!
Corrected text:
She must have the protagonist's aura which caused her to be so fortunate.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-16 09:04:13
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This must be a lie. How careless of her to instantly accept the offer. Bai Lian, who had lost her memory, gradually understood everything after recovering her memory.
Corrected text:
This must be a lie. How careless could she have been to instantly accept the offer? Bai Lian, who originally had no memories of this world, gradually came to understand everything after a period of time.
Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:55:59
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This must be a lie. How careless of her to instantly accept the offer. Bai Lian, who had lost her memory, gradually understood everything after remembering.
Corrected text:
This must be a lie. How careless of her to instantly accept the offer. Bai Lian, who had lost her memory, gradually understood everything after recovering her memory.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:38:08
Original text:
This is all an illusion.
Corrected text:
This must be an illusion. How careless of her to instantly accept the offer. Bai Lian, who had lost her memory (of this life?) gradually understood everything after remembering. (Wait she had memory loss, kinda late to introduce that info)
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:17:53
Original text:
Bai Lian, who recovered her memory, gradually understood everything.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian then knew why it was An Lan had accepted her.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 10:00:03
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The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own curiosity. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who was full of "Death" words around her body, would die.
Corrected text:
The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own curiosity. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who was covered by an aura of "Death" around her body, would die.
Corrected by: Taabraiz-Akhtar , 2022-11-09 14:29:44
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The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own curiosity. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who was full of "Death" words around her body, would die.
Corrected text:
The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own curiosity. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who had "Death" written all over her body, would die.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:40:57
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The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own bad taste. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who was full of death over her body, would die.
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The reason why An Lan accepted her as a disciple was purely out of her own curiosity. She wanted to see how Bai Lian, who was full of death, would die. (how is she full of death tho, what sense is being used? Smell, divine sight?)
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:06:39
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The reason is that the world where Bai Lian now lives is an R18 gal game called "The Battle of the Gods".
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The reason is that the world Bai Lian currently lives in is an R18 gal game called "The Battle of the Gods".
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:41:28
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This game is beautifully painted, with numerous characters for introduction, and the voice is just right for flirting. It is no wonder it becomes a first-class game!
Corrected text:
The game was beautifully designed, with numerous introduced characters and the voice is just right for flirting. It is no wonder it became a first-class game! (also what's the voice thing, is it a general voice actor (narrator) or the voice of the main character?)
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:32:26
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In the game, the players play a "bitch" named Bai Lian, who often "bullies" her younger martial sisters. In some routes she even controlled her master An Lan and did all kinds of things to her!
Corrected text:
In the game, the players play a "b*tch" named Bai Lian, who often "bullies" her younger martial sisters. In some routes, she even controlled her master An Lan and did all kinds of things to her!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:41:41
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In the game, the players play a "bitch" named Bai Lian, who often "bullies" her younger martial sisters without saying a word. In some routes, she even controlled her master An Lan and did all kinds of things to her!
Corrected text:
In the game, the players play a "bitch" named Bai Lian, who often "bullies" her younger martial sisters. In some routes she even controlled her master An Lan and did all kinds of things to her!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:43:06
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The Battle of the Gods didn't end well.
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The Story didn't end well. The problem lies in the plot line. This is more of an abstinence aid rather than an adult game.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:10:17
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This is an Abstinence Aids rather than an R-18 gal game.
Corrected text:
This was an Abstinence Aids rather than an R-18 gal game.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:45:04
Original text:
This is an Abstinence Aids rather than an r18 gal game.
Corrected text:
This is an Abstinence Aids rather than an R-18 gal game.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:33:41
Original text:
The protagonist, Bai Lian, had as many as 108 ways of death, which is even worse than Itou Makoto.
Corrected text:
The protagonist, Bai Lian, had as many as 108 routes of death, which is even worse than Itou Makoto.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:11:09
Original text:
The protagonist, Bai Lian, has as many as 108 ways of death, which is even worse than Itou Makoto in some sense.
Corrected text:
The protagonist, Bai Lian, had as many as 108 ways of death, which is even worse than Itou Makoto in some sense.
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Corrected by: Taabraiz-Akhtar , 2022-11-09 14:29:46
Original text:
The most painful thing was that the death screen couldn't be skipped. One second, the player was still savoring the eye-catching illustrations, and the next second, the protagonist's head may have been chopped off.
Corrected text:
The most painful experience was not being able to skip the death scenes. One second, the player could be savoring the eye-catching illustrations, however the next second, the protagonist's head may be seen getting t chopped off.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:12:38
Original text:
The most painful thing is that the death screen cannot be skipped. One second ago, the player was still savoring the eye-catching illustrations, and the next second, the protagonist's head may have been chopped down.
Corrected text:
The most painful thing was that the death screen couldn't be skipped. One second, the player was still savoring the eye-catching illustrations, and the next second, the protagonist's head may have been chopped off.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 08:46:22
Original text:
The most painful thing is that the death screen cannot be skipped. One second ago, the player was still savoring the eye-catching vertical painting, and the next second, the protagonist's head may have been chopped down.
Corrected text:
The most painful thing is that the death screen cannot be skipped. One second ago, the player was still savoring the eye-catching illustrations, and the next second, the protagonist's head may have been chopped down.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:38
Original text:
"Motherf*cker! I was almost scared to death. Cursing for the producer to always forget bringing toilet paper whenever he goes to the bathroom!"
Corrected text:
"Motherf*cker! I was almost scared to death. I curse the producer to always forget to bring toilet paper whenever he goes to the bathroom!"
Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:04
Original text:
"MotherfXcker! I was almost scared to death. Cursing the producer for forgetting to bring toilet paper when going to the bathroom!"
Corrected text:
"Motherf*cker! I was almost scared to death. Cursing for the producer to always forget bringing toilet paper whenever he goes to the bathroom!"
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:13:26
Original text:
"MontherfXck! I'm almost scared to death. Cursing the producer to forget to bring toilet paper when going to the bathroom!"
Corrected text:
"MotherfXcker! I was almost scared to death. Cursing the producer to forget to bring toilet paper when going to the bathroom!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 08:46:26
Original text:
"MontherfXck! I'm almost scared to death. The producer must forget to bring toilet paper when going to the bathroom!"
Corrected text:
"MontherfXck! I'm almost scared to death. Cursing the producer to forget to bring toilet paper when going to the bathroom!"
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:08
Original text:
The Battle of the Gods was deemed a horror game according to some players.
Corrected text:
The Battle of the Gods was considered to be a horror game by some players.
Corrected by: Taabraiz-Akhtar , 2022-11-09 14:29:50
Original text:
The Battle of the Gods became a horror game in some players mouths.
Corrected text:
Some players considered "The Battle of the Gods" to be a horror game instead.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:43:12
Original text:
The War of the Gods became a horror game in some players' mouths.
Corrected text:
The Battle of the Gods became a horror game in some players mouths.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:43:48
Original text:
Bai Lian was also tricked into playing the game by this screenshot and then she found out that this was not a horror game but an R18 gal game instead.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian was also tricked into playing the game by that death screen post and then she found out that this was not a horror game, but an R18 gal game instead.
Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:23
Original text:
Bai Lian initially wanted to play a horror game and was tricked by the screenshots, only to find out that this game was actually from a completely different genre. An R18 gal game.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian was also tricked into playing the game by this screenshot and then she found out that this was not a horror game but an R18 gal game instead.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:43:49
Original text:
Bai Lian was also tricked to play the game by this screenshot, and then she found that this was not a horror game at all, but an r18 game.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian initially wanted to play a game of the horror genre, but was then tricked to play by that screenshot and found out that this was a completely different genre. An R18 gal game.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:43:23
Original text:
Bai Lian was also tricked to play the game by this screenshot, and then she found that this was not a horror game at all, but an r18 game.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian initially wanted to play a game of the horror genre, but was then tricked to play by that screenshot and found out that this was a completely different genre. An R18 gal game.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:44:14
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Although the protagonist was female, this didn't affect the wonderful "battle" process.
Corrected text:
Although the protagonist was female, this didn't affect the wonderful "battle" processes.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:14:47
Original text:
Although the protagonist is female, this doesn't affect the wonderful "battle" process.
Corrected text:
Although the protagonist was female, this didn't affect the wonderful "battle" process.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:15:25
Original text:
In eagerness, she pressed the CTRL key to skip most scenes...
Corrected text:
In her eagerness, she pressed the CTRL key to skip most scenes...
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:43:56
Original text:
In eagerness, she pressed the CTRL key to skip all plots...
Corrected text:
In eagerness, she pressed the CTRL key to skip most scenes...
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-07 15:39:40
Original text:
And then…
Corrected text:
And now…
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:44:06
Original text:
Bai Lian was now very regretful. Because she didn't read the plots, all she knew about the plot was limited to a few words spread on the forum.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian was now very regretful. Because she didn't read the plot, all she knew about it was limited to a few words spread on the forum.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:18:50
Original text:
However, the game is just a game after all. Most of the time, the plot focuses on Bai Lian. Even if she knows the general direction of the plot, she may not be able to live.
Corrected text:
However, the game was just a game after all. Most of the time, the plot focused on Bai Lian. Even if she knew the general direction of the plot, she might not be able to live.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:45:57
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Even though she was the "protagonist", she was not immortal. It meant that even if she just meditated in the yard, her body and soul might be destroyed by a sword flying down from the sky.
Corrected text:
Even though she was the "protagonist", she was not immortal. It meant that even if she just meditated in the yard, her body and soul might be destroyed by a random sword flying down from the sky.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:21:17
Original text:
Even though she is the "protagonist", she is not immortal. It means that even if she just meditates in the yard, her body and soul may be destroyed by a sword flying down from the sky.
Corrected text:
Even though she was the "protagonist", she was not immortal. It meant that even if she just meditated in the yard, her body and soul might be destroyed by a sword flying down from the sky.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:21:33
Original text:
This is by no means an idle worry.
Corrected text:
This was by no means an idle worry.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:21:52
Original text:
She has experienced many death endings, some of which happened when the protagonist was walking on the road, and then she was——
Corrected text:
She had experienced many death endings, some of which happened when the protagonist was walking on the road, and then she was——
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Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-08-03 08:43:54
Original text:
[killed by a flying shadow]
Corrected text:
[Killed by a flying shadow]
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Corrected by: Sang-N , 2022-08-03 08:43:58
Original text:
[imprisoned by a white shadow]
Corrected text:
[Imprisoned by a White Shadow]
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:22:53
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There was also some "Happy ending" in which she was beaten to death by people in the middle of the night because she was too arrogant in the contest.
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There was also a "Happy Ending" in which she was beaten to death by people in the middle of the night because she was too arrogant in the contest.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 10:00:05
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Thinking of this, Bai Lian trembled all over. Her hands and feet became ice-cold in the daytime. The world was full of malice and oppression against Bai Lian. When can Bai Lian stand up?!
Corrected text:
Thinking of this, Bai Lian trembled all over. Her hands and feet became ice-cold, even in the daytime. The world was full of malice and oppression against Bai Lian. When can Bai Lian stand up?!
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:23:22
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Thinking of this, Bai Lian trembled all over. Her hands and feet became ice-cold in the daytime. The world is full of malice and oppression against Bai Lian. When can Bai Lian stand up?!
Corrected text:
Thinking of this, Bai Lian trembled all over. Her hands and feet became ice-cold in the daytime. The world was full of malice and oppression against Bai Lian. When can Bai Lian stand up?!
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:23:44
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Bai Lian also knows the reason why the protagonist in the game ended up like this.
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Bai Lian also knew the reason why the protagonist in the game ended up like this.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:47:00
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Especially the group of women of the Qiongming peak.
Corrected text:
Especially the group of women from Qiongming Peak.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:47:39
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Master An Lan, the leader of the Qiongming peak, was actually the reincarnation of the Immortal Heavenly Lord. It was said that she once had the strength to both carry heaven and be immortal in reincarnation.
Corrected text:
Master An Lan, the leader of the Qiongming Peak, was actually the reincarnation of the Immortal Heavenly Lord. It was said that she once had the strength to both carry heaven and be immortal in reincarnation.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:24:24
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Master An Lan, the leader of the Qiongming peak, is actually the reincarnation of the Immortal Heavenly Lord. It is said that she once had the strength to both carry heaven and be immortal in reincarnation.
Corrected text:
Master An Lan, the leader of the Qiongming peak, was actually the reincarnation of the Immortal Heavenly Lord. It was said that she once had the strength to both carry heaven and be immortal in reincarnation.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:25:15
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Her four younger martial sisters are also not ordinary people.
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Her four younger martial sisters were also not ordinary people.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:48:27
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In addition to them, there was also the descendant of the Taixuan Divine Needle, the descendant of the Dragon King, and the Lord of the Hades hall in the Duxian sect…
Corrected text:
In addition to them, there was also the descendant of the Taixuan Divine Needle, the descendant of the Dragon King, and the Lord of the Hades hall in the Duxian Sect…
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:26:06
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In addition to them, there are also the descendant of the Taixuan Divine Needle, the descendant of the Dragon King, and the Lord of the Hades hall in the Duxian sect...
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In addition to them, there was also the descendant of the Taixuan Divine Needle, the descendant of the Dragon King, and the Lord of the Hades hall in the Duxian sect...
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:26:16
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Compared to them, Bai Lian is just an ordinary person.
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Compared to them, Bai Lian was just an ordinary person.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:49:42
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She could do whatever she wanted while the younger martial sisters were not strong enough, slapping the Holy Spirit Goddess, and kicking the descendant of the Dragon King. But after they grow up, not only would she be suppressed like hell, but all her ancestors would have to be dug out and spat on.
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She could do whatever she wanted while the younger martial sisters were not strong enough, slapping The Holy Spirit Goddess, and kicking the descendant of The Dragon King. But after they grow up, not only would she be suppressed like hell, but all her ancestors would have to be dug out and spat on.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:44:13
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She could do whatever she wanted while the younger martial sisters were not strong enough, slapping the Holy Spirit Goddess, and kicking the descendant of the Dragon King. But after they grow up, not only would she be suppressed under hell, but all her ancestors would have to be dug out and spat on.
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She could do whatever she wanted while the younger martial sisters were not strong enough, slapping the Holy Spirit Goddess, and kicking the descendant of the Dragon King. But after they grow up, not only would she be suppressed like hell, but all her ancestors would have to be dug out and spat on.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:50:02
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"How dare you provoke the Holy Spirit Goddess/ the Rebellious Shura / the Dragon God of War/ … ?"
Corrected text:
"How dare you provoke The Holy Spirit Goddess/ The Rebellious Shura / The Dragon God of War/ … ?"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:28:44
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"The whole cultivation world will have no place for you!"
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"There's no place for you in this whole world!"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:29:45
Original text:
Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending in which the protagonist didn't die, but no one could test it out. She doesn't think that she can do it with only one try at life.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending in which the protagonist didn't die, but no one could test it out. She didn't think that she could do it with only one try at life.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:45:11
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Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending that the protagonist didn't die in the end, but no one could test it out. She doesn't think that she can test it out alone with only one life.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending in which the protagonist didn't die, but no one could test it out. She doesn't think that she can do it with only one try at life.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 08:46:32
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Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending that the protagonist didn't die in the ending, but no one could test it out. She doesn't think that she can test it out alone with only one life.
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Bai Lian heard that there was a hidden ending that the protagonist didn't die in the end, but no one could test it out. She doesn't think that she can test it out alone with only one life.
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Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:39
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"I must not take it lightly!"
Corrected text:
"I must not take it this lightly!"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:30:03
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Bai Lian wants to save herself.
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Bai Lian wanted to save herself.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:52:41
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She decided to never provoke anyone, but that didn't mean that she would be able to live safely. There were several major events in the game that affected the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crisis.
Corrected text:
She decided to never provoke anyone, but that didn't mean that she would be able to live safely. There were several major events in the game that affected the whole Duxian Sect. She must become strong in order to survive them.
Corrected by: AesZy , 2022-09-06 08:14:56
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She decided to never provoke anyone, but that didn't mean that she would be able to live safely. There were several major events in the game that affected the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crises.
Corrected text:
She decided to never provoke anyone, but that didn't mean that she would be able to live safely. There were several major events in the game that affected the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crisis.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:30:56
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She decides to never provoke anyone, but that doesn't mean that she will be able to live safely. There are several major events in the game that affect the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crises.
Corrected text:
She decided to never provoke anyone, but that didn't mean that she would be able to live safely. There were several major events in the game that affected the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crises.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:45:22
Original text:
She decides to never provoke anyone, but that doesn't mean that she will be able to live safely. There are several major events in the game that affect the whole Duxian sect. She must become stronger to survive the crises.
Corrected text:
She decides to never provoke anyone, but that doesn't mean that she will be able to live safely. There are several major events in the game that affect the whole Duxian sect. She must become strong to survive the crises.
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Corrected by: AesZy , 2022-09-06 08:19:31
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Speaking of which, her master An Lan asked her to go to find her second younger martial sister this time.
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Speaking of which, her master An Lan asked her to go find her second younger martial sister this time.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:32:20
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Speaking of it, her master An Lan asked her to go to find the second younger martial sister this time.
Corrected text:
Speaking of which, her master An Lan asked her to go to find her second younger martial sister this time.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:45:46
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Speaking of it, the master An Lan asked her to go to find the second younger martial sister this time.
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Speaking of it, her master An Lan asked her to go to find the second younger martial sister this time.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:32:42
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Bai Lian has to worry.
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Bai Lian began to worry.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:26
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"Well?"
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"Huh?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 08:46:40
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She thought that after losing her special identity as a player, she would become a marginal figure in the world.
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She thought that after losing her special identity as a player, she would become a passer-by like figure in the world.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:38:19
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The time has changed!
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The times have changed!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-22 08:36:20
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The name is of little perfunctory and a little inferior.
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The name of it is a little perfunctory and a little inferior.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:39:11
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Forget it.
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Whatever.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-31 14:37:41
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The first thing that appeared in Bai Lian's eyes was her personal information, which was no different from the interface where she played the Battle of the Gods.
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The first thing that appeared in Bai Lian's eyes was her personal information, which was no different from the interface when she played the Battle of the Gods.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 03:57:17
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Cultivation Level: Later stage of the Foundation Establishment Stage
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Cultivation Level: Late Foundation Establishment
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:31
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[Ethics: none]
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[Morality: none]
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:33
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Even if I have no ethics, why do you have to mark it?
Corrected text:
Even if I have no morality, why do you have to emphasize it?
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:40:35
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Even if my ethics is zero, why do you have to mark it?
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Even if I have no ethics, why do you have to mark it?
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Bai Lian is very angry.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian was furious.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:35
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She looked through the system interface several times and had to admit that she was a person without ethics. Even if it was low, it was better than nothing!
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She looked through the system interface several times and had to admit that she was a person without morals. Even if it was low, it was better than nothing!
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:43:41
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They can be understood as Strength/Endurance, Quickness[/Agility], Energy, and [Focus].
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They could be understood as Strength/Endurance, Agility, Energy, and Focus.
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Anyone who has played "Ho Tu Lo Shu : The Books of Dragon" knows it.
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Anyone who has played "Ho Tu Lo Shu: The Books of Dragon" knows it.
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The current basic stats of Bai Lian are as follows——
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The current basic stats of Bai Lian were as follows——
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:45:42
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[Light Skill：83]
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[Light Skill: 83]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-27 09:50:33
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If she remembered correctly, the upper limit of these skills should be 100 points, but it was not indicated by the system.
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If she remembered correctly, the maximum limit of these skills should be 100 points, but it was not indicated by the system.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:46:28
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If she remembers correctly, the upper limit of these skills should be 100 points, but it is not indicated on the system.
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If she remembered correctly, the upper limit of these skills should be 100 points, but it was not indicated by the system.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:47:06
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She is already a cultivator. Basic skills are of no use to her now. She continues to read.
Corrected text:
She was already a cultivator. Basic skills were currently of no use to her. She continued to read.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:38
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In the moves column, the most conspicuous move was [Water Dragon Durance].
Corrected text:
In the moves column, the most conspicuous move was [Water Dragon Dance].
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-27 09:51:10
Original text:
In the moves column, the most conspicuous move was [Water Dragon Durance].
Corrected text:
In the moves column, the most conspicuous move was [Water Dragon Dance].
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:48:08
Original text:
In the moves column, the most conspicuous move is [Water Dragon Durance].
Corrected text:
In the moves column, the most conspicuous move was [Water Dragon Durance].
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:48:54
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It can control the power of water, using water to attack and defend. It can also suppress the opponent's cultivation base. This is a magic skill of Bai Lian's major.
Corrected text:
It could control the power of water, using water to attack and defend. It could also suppress the opponent's cultivation base. This was a magic skill of Bai Lian's major.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:50:08
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It sounds powerful. In fact, this skill is just spraying water. The more water you spray, the greater the power is.
Corrected text:
It sounded powerful, but in reality, this skill was just spraying water. The more water you sprayed, the greater its power would be.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:00:51
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It was said that this was a spell inspired by the Dragon King.
Corrected text:
It was said that this was a spell inspired by The Dragon King.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:50:57
Original text:
It is said that this is a spell inspired by the Dragon King.
Corrected text:
It was said that this was a spell inspired by the Dragon King.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:51:12
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Bai Lian knows that this rumor is true.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian knew that this rumor was true.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:01:27
Original text:
There is a descendant of the Dragon King in the Duxian sect. Bai Lian fought with her in the game. The descendant of the Dragon King could summon a water spray more than ten miles high, submerging the plain.
Corrected text:
There is a descendant of The Dragon King in the Duxian Sect. Bai Lian fought with her in the game. The descendant of The Dragon King could summon a water spray more than ten miles high, submerging plains.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:42
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Bai Lian looked at the column of Techniques again. It included music theory, chess, medicine, painting, calligraphy, cooking, tea ceremony, Taoist magic theory, and so on.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian looked at the column of Techniques again. It included music theory, chess, medicine, painting, calligraphy, cooking, tea ceremony, Taoism, and so on.
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:52:24
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Bai Lian looked again at the column of Techniques, including music theory, chess, medicine, painting, calligraphy, cooking, tea ceremony, Taoist magic theory, and so on.
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Bai Lian looked at the column of Techniques again. It included music theory, chess, medicine, painting, calligraphy, cooking, tea ceremony, Taoist magic theory, and so on.
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:48
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Only idiots would practice these!
Corrected text:
Only idiots would practice these skills!
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Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:51
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"I want to cultivate, I want to fly to the Immortal World, and I want to find 100 lovers!"
Corrected text:
"I want to cultivate, I want to fly through the Immortal World, and I want to find 100 lovers!"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:53:30
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The question now is how she can use this system to improve her strength. Since it's name is [Task System], she thinks that she needs to do tasks to get rewards.
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The question now was how she could use this system to improve her strength. Since its name was [Task System], she figured that she needed to do tasks to get rewards.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:53:54
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She understood roughly.
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She roughly understood.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:02:51
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"Ah, it's Martial Sister Bai Lian, the goddess of Qiongming peak!"
Corrected text:
"Ah, it's Martial Sister Bai Lian, The Goddess of Qiongming Peak!"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:03:15
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"Martial Sister Bai Lian really is like the rumor said. Her charm and demeanor, ah, I'm dead."
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"Martial Sister Bai Lian really is like what the rumors said. Her charm and demeanor, ah, I'm dead."
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Corrected by: Jito-Mitsuhide , 2022-07-20 12:29:10
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"Martial Sister Bai Lian looks at me, Martial Sister Bai Lian looks at me!"
Corrected text:
"Martial Sister Bai Lian looked at me, Martial Sister Bai Lian looked at me!"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:03:46
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Bai Lian smiled and nodded to her fellow disciples. Soon her figure disappeared on the Qiongming peak.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian smiled and nodded to her fellow disciples. Soon her figure disappeared on the Qiongming Peak.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:54:34
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Although she had gone, the aftertaste was still there.
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Although she was gone, the aftertaste was still there.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:04:40
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On the day An Lan accepted Bai Lian as her disciple, even the sect leader was shocked. Therefore, all the people in the Duxian sect thought that Bai Lian was the favored one with great prospects to rise to the Immortal World.
Corrected text:
On the day An Lan accepted Bai Lian as her disciple, even the sect leader was shocked. Therefore, all the people in the Duxian Sect thought that Bai Lian was the favored one with great prospects to rise to the Immortal World.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:55:18
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That is, with this identity, Bai Lian can do whatever she wants in many routes of the game.
Corrected text:
That is, with this identity, Bai Lian could do whatever she wanted in many routes of the game.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2023-01-10 10:00:08
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Passerby B: I think it's because you are jealous of Martial Sister Bai Lian and deliberately framed her!
Corrected text:
Passerby B: I think you are just jealous of Martial Sister Bai Lian and are deliberately framing her!
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:58:24
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There are too many such sounds.
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There were too many of such instances.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:05:15
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– On the top of the Qiongming peak.
Corrected text:
– On the top of the Qiongming Peak.
Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:53
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– The top of the Qiongming peak.
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– On the top of the Qiongming peak.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:07:19
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Bai Lian raised her head and saw a young girl in a thin water-blue dress, a quiet smile on her beautiful face. Her dark blue eyes were as deep as the sea, and a pair of Yin-Yang fish at the corner of her eyes were also quite eye-catching.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian raised her head and saw a young girl in a thin water-blue dress, a quiet smile on her beautiful face. Her dark blue eyes were as deep as the sea, and a pair of yin-yang fish at the corner of her eyes were also quite eye-catching.
Corrected by: Reika-V , 2022-11-30 14:56:56
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Bai Lian raised her head and saw a young girl in a thin water blue shirt, a quiet smile on her beautiful face. Her dark blue eyes were as deep as the sea, and a pair of Yin-Yang fish at the corner of her eyes were also quite eye-catching.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian raised her head and saw a young girl in a thin water-blue dress, a quiet smile on her beautiful face. Her dark blue eyes were as deep as the sea, and a pair of Yin-Yang fish at the corner of her eyes were also quite eye-catching.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:08:11
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In her previous life, she was the Immortal Heaven Lord, the famous King of the Immortal World!
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In her previous life, she was the Immortal Heaven Lord, the famous Queen of the Immortal World!
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 01:59:29
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In her previous lives, she was the Immortal Heaven Lord and the famous King of the Immortal World!
Corrected text:
In her previous life, she was the Immortal Heaven Lord and the famous King of the Immortal World!
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:00:24
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In the background story, her favorite line was "Hum!", "XXX? He is garbage!", "The king cannot be disgraced", "Then come and have a try. Even if I hold XXX in one hand and carry XXX on my back, I, An Lan, am still invincible!"
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In the background story, her favorite line was "Hmph!", "XXX? He is garbage!", "This queen cannot be disgraced", "Then come and have a try. Even if I hold XXX in one hand and carry XXX on my back, I, An Lan, am still invincible!"
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:08:50
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Then, the two supreme masters fought at the edge of the universe, until the star river was broken, and the will of Tao was obliterated!
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Then, the two supreme masters fought at the edge of the universe, until the star river was broken, and the will of tao was obliterated!
Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:00:50
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Then, the two supreme masters fought to the edge of the universe, until the star river was broken, and the will of Tao was obliterated!
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Then, the two supreme masters fought at the edge of the universe, until the star river was broken, and the will of Tao was obliterated!
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:09:58
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"The will of Tao? Can it be eaten?"
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"The will of tao? Can it be eaten?"
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:01:58
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It is clear that she is a homegirl.
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It was clear that she was a homebody.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:02:43
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Bai Lian quickly shook her head and threw away the strange pictures.
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Bai Lian quickly shook her head and threw away the strange images.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:03:16
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This is the main line of the game.
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This was the main line of the game.
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Corrected by: Alter-Sky , 2023-01-01 04:11:23
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[Task 2: Cross your hands in front of your chest, glare at An Lan, and say: You may be my master… But I refuse! (Reward: Washing Bone Elixir)]
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[Task 2: Cross your hands in front of your chest, glare at An Lan, and say: You may be my master… but I refuse! (Reward: Washing Bone Elixir)]
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[Task 3: Promise An Lan. (Reward: Soft Skill +1)]
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[Task 3: Agree to An Lan. (Reward: Soft Skill +1)]
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:07:31
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Although Task 1 and Task 2 are rich in rewards, I don't have the guts to do them! She clearly remembers that in the game, the outcome of Task 1 is being kicked off the Qiongming peak by An Lan and was eaten by a bypaschant flying beast. This system is like this. The richer the task reward is, the greater the potential risk is. You may just choose a task with exaggerated rewards, and then you have been killed.
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Although Task 1 and Task 2 are rich in rewards, I don't have the guts to do them! She clearly remembered that in the game, the outcome of Task 1 was being kicked off the Qiongming peak by An Lan and then eaten by a Bypaschant flying beast. The system was like this. The richer the task reward was, the greater the potential risk. You might just choose a task with exaggerated rewards, and then you would be killed.
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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-08-30 02:07:44
Original text:
The [Task System] is clearly a "Villain's Task System"!
Corrected text:
The [Task System] was clearly a "Villain's Task System"!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:47:26
Original text:
It doesn't deserve me, so I won’t continue cultivating!
Corrected text:
It isn't worth my life, so I won’t continue cultivating!
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